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Array ( [sid] => 36863 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Why O Why Should I Try? [time] => 2004-03-01 01:11:26 [hometext] => This poem serves as a reflection of myslef when I have a girl friend: those past present and mosy likely future [bodytext] => Try Try your hardest, commit to one, be their whole.
Sly sly you are, they never know you’re the mole
Under there skin sometimes but always with good intentions.
Yet never understood, your effort never mentioned

Self pity your blame, doubt is your game
Love seems a lie, as emotions die
Echoes ringing through, voices driving you insane
Try try your hardest but it still makes you cry

You do your best to show, show her you care the most
It is too much? Never knowing, the problem grows.
How is one to know, when feelings are genuine and true?
How do you know when it is over? How do you know if it is you?

Fly Fly, you must try again, do what feels right
Why, Why you ask, what went wrong, what vision is out of sight?
You second-guess your self, you analyze your place
But one never knows their place, or why tears run down their face.

Give me the truth, as I demand to know, what form?
Outlook of snow, your cold as I keep you warm.
Missing eye contact contracts a heart missing its beat.
Try try you do, but her expectations you can never meet.

Give it up you think, cry, cry our eyes to sleep
Why why does it work this way? With tears counting sheep.
Without a though in your mind, except for her. Don’t give up yet, as your eyes begin to blur
Tears wash away your fears, as you prove yourself a lie.
Nothing but an emotional teen, but why o why do we still try?
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Why O Why Should I Try?

Contributed by MyInspiration on Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 01:11:26 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



Try Try your hardest, commit to one, be their whole.
Sly sly you are, they never know you’re the mole
Under there skin sometimes but always with good intentions.
Yet never understood, your effort never mentioned

Self pity your blame, doubt is your game
Love seems a lie, as emotions die
Echoes ringing through, voices driving you insane
Try try your hardest but it still makes you cry

You do your best to show, show her you care the most
It is too much? Never knowing, the problem grows.
How is one to know, when feelings are genuine and true?
How do you know when it is over? How do you know if it is you?

Fly Fly, you must try again, do what feels right
Why, Why you ask, what went wrong, what vision is out of sight?
You second-guess your self, you analyze your place
But one never knows their place, or why tears run down their face.

Give me the truth, as I demand to know, what form?
Outlook of snow, your cold as I keep you warm.
Missing eye contact contracts a heart missing its beat.
Try try you do, but her expectations you can never meet.

Give it up you think, cry, cry our eyes to sleep
Why why does it work this way? With tears counting sheep.
Without a though in your mind, except for her. Don’t give up yet, as your eyes begin to blur
Tears wash away your fears, as you prove yourself a lie.
Nothing but an emotional teen, but why o why do we still try?




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