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Array ( [sid] => 36688 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => someone who cared [time] => 2004-02-28 15:30:30 [hometext] => dont worry, its not a true story :) [bodytext] => I knew him well
although not his name
or where he was from
or really who he was
but he seemed nice
supportive and caring
with his own troubles
sitting on his shoulders
but he was dealing
he said he was a friend
and wouldn't hurt me
but protect me his best
for he said i was only a girl
a girl on a journey
he told me i was lonely
trying to find people who cared
and he was right on it
he said that he cared
and that i could stay at his place
we walked into a large room
it had three beds, although
when i asked him questions
he replied back with questions
i asked if he lived with anyone
and then thats what he asked me
so i just stopped asking
and stayed there all night
i told him i had to go home
the next day but he said no
that i should stay with him
and then he started flirting
and it gradually got worse
he started touching me
threatening me with guns
and told me to pick a bed
and get on it right then
so i did... he had a gun
then he took of all of my cloths
and then took off his
he stuck it in hard and fast
i screamed quite loud
but he payed no attention
and kept going and going
i begged him to stop
but he said no and
picked up the gun
told me to run away
and threatened to kill me...
if anyone found out about it.
often i get calls that say
that it wasnt his fault
and asking forgiveness
but i cant forgive anyone
anymore because that night
after it was all over
i took my life and
will haunt him forever [comments] => 4 [counter] => 150 [topic] => 43 [informant] => SAT [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
someone who cared

Contributed by SAT on Saturday, 28th February 2004 @ 03:30:30 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



I knew him well
although not his name
or where he was from
or really who he was
but he seemed nice
supportive and caring
with his own troubles
sitting on his shoulders
but he was dealing
he said he was a friend
and wouldn't hurt me
but protect me his best
for he said i was only a girl
a girl on a journey
he told me i was lonely
trying to find people who cared
and he was right on it
he said that he cared
and that i could stay at his place
we walked into a large room
it had three beds, although
when i asked him questions
he replied back with questions
i asked if he lived with anyone
and then thats what he asked me
so i just stopped asking
and stayed there all night
i told him i had to go home
the next day but he said no
that i should stay with him
and then he started flirting
and it gradually got worse
he started touching me
threatening me with guns
and told me to pick a bed
and get on it right then
so i did... he had a gun
then he took of all of my cloths
and then took off his
he stuck it in hard and fast
i screamed quite loud
but he payed no attention
and kept going and going
i begged him to stop
but he said no and
picked up the gun
told me to run away
and threatened to kill me...
if anyone found out about it.
often i get calls that say
that it wasnt his fault
and asking forgiveness
but i cant forgive anyone
anymore because that night
after it was all over
i took my life and
will haunt him forever




Copyright © SAT ... [ 2004-02-28 15:30:30]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: someone who cared (User Rating: 1 )
by neglected1 on Saturday, 28th February 2004 @ 03:43:49 PM AEST
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Whoa ... excellent write.. im so happy that its not real though.. it shows you how much trust is a factor in life .. not everyone is exactly what they clame to be...

*superior*
keep up the excellent work

~neglected1~


Re: someone who cared (User Rating: 1 )
by doug on Saturday, 28th February 2004 @ 03:45:14 PM AEST
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a powerful description and different from most poems i read. different is good
keep up the good work your friend doug


Re: someone who cared (User Rating: 1 )
by Whisper on Saturday, 28th February 2004 @ 08:48:43 PM AEST
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Thats aweful.
Its cruel,its brutal and its senseless.
Sorry it made my heart sad for such a reminder of long past- and I still live.
Take from it what you will.

Whisper


Re: someone who cared (User Rating: 1 )
by loveisendless on Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 11:17:14 PM AEST
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SAD & TOO BAD! SOME GUYS ARE JUST A
WASTE OF HUMAN SPACE!! THEY TAKE OUT NOT BEING ABLE TO BE A MAN ON ALL
KINDS OF INNOCENT WOMEN!!! MAYBE
SOMEDAY THEY'LL BE IN PRISON,& SOON BE SOMEBODIES-*****!!!! THEN THEY'LL KNOW WHAT IT WAS LIKE FOR THEIR VICTIMS!!!!!
LOL-DAN!!!!!!




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