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Limb from limb
To see you writhe
To hear you scream

You look so pretty when you cry
Look up at me with fear
Your lovely eyes, puffy and red
Now weep for me again

You scream so hard a vessel bursts
And scarlet tears fall from your eyes
A gash across the mouth
Your lip is cracked and bleeding

You sink to the floor
I look down and you and grin
A mess you are, so bloody
And with my blade, I slash your face, diagnol

You'll never be so pretty again... [comments] => 4 [counter] => 234 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Saitou-sama [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 6 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

So Pretty

Contributed by Saitou-sama on Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 11:15:42 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

How I love to slice you
Limb from limb
To see you writhe
To hear you scream

You look so pretty when you cry
Look up at me with fear
Your lovely eyes, puffy and red
Now weep for me again

You scream so hard a vessel bursts
And scarlet tears fall from your eyes
A gash across the mouth
Your lip is cracked and bleeding

You sink to the floor
I look down and you and grin
A mess you are, so bloody
And with my blade, I slash your face, diagnol

You'll never be so pretty again...

Copyright © Saitou-sama ... [ 2004-02-25 23:15:42]
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Re: So Pretty (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 11:19:16 PM AEST
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Yeah! Right on..... I love these kinds of poems. look up slipknot's lyrics to their cd iowa...read the ones for track 14..you'll love it

Re: So Pretty (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 11:41:39 PM AEST
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whoa. dark and em dark lol. that was awesome! good work i really liked this.
Arden

Re: So Pretty (User Rating: 1 )
by JadedExistence on Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 12:01:02 AM AEST
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Very dark and disturbing...I love it. I haven't seen many poems written from this point of view that I liked but I definitely like this one.
-JadedExistence

Re: So Pretty (User Rating: 1 )
by WorthlesSanity666 on Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 01:41:47 PM AEST
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Beautifully twisted.... I LOVE it!!! Just the right amount of darkness... beautiful, just beautiful...

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