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Array ( [sid] => 3616 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Eloquence of Rose [time] => 2002-09-10 10:15:24 [hometext] => Just some of my feelings of rambled thoughts of someone special, that did just as this write said. I wonder what is wrong with me, what it is that men run from, or I don’t have… I know you cannot live on love; it sure does help though, to have that
Connection, but finding out your hearts desire, has no clue you’re even there… [bodytext] => Eloquence of Rose

She has the ability to open up, like a rose
Thoughtfully feeling of one, her heart swells
She yearns to say all she feels; slowly she smiles

Bursting inside it cannot hold
Beware this feeling; she needs to reach out
To the one who she cares for

As she looks in the distance
Thinking of those love thoughts
Daydreaming, the petals of a rose in her hands

Til, finally the substance of her spirit
Can face her true love
Can he face her, her honesty, and her love…

As she pours her soul to him
He cannot face his feelings
He ignores her thoughts

The pain in her eyes, it shows
Although she holds well inside
The love she has, now, not sure why…

When he has nothing to say
She wonders what is wrong with her
Her love, her alone, not good enough

Be it as it may, she must go on
Somehow managing those thoughts alone
The breaking of a heart, still all alone…

Amber Rose Yeager – September 9, 2002

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Eloquence of Rose

Contributed by Rose on Tuesday, 10th September 2002 @ 10:15:24 AM in AEST
Topic: SecretLove



Eloquence of Rose

She has the ability to open up, like a rose
Thoughtfully feeling of one, her heart swells
She yearns to say all she feels; slowly she smiles

Bursting inside it cannot hold
Beware this feeling; she needs to reach out
To the one who she cares for

As she looks in the distance
Thinking of those love thoughts
Daydreaming, the petals of a rose in her hands

Til, finally the substance of her spirit
Can face her true love
Can he face her, her honesty, and her love…

As she pours her soul to him
He cannot face his feelings
He ignores her thoughts

The pain in her eyes, it shows
Although she holds well inside
The love she has, now, not sure why…

When he has nothing to say
She wonders what is wrong with her
Her love, her alone, not good enough

Be it as it may, she must go on
Somehow managing those thoughts alone
The breaking of a heart, still all alone…

Amber Rose Yeager – September 9, 2002





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Re: Eloquence of Rose (User Rating: 1 )
by Suzy on Tuesday, 10th September 2002 @ 05:44:22 PM AEST
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This is sad...there's absolutely nothing wrong with you...don't ever let anyone make you feel as though you are not good enough for them....You yourself are all you need to be and that alone should be enough...wonderful right Amber Rose...and remember you are never really alone there are always people who love you for you...Hope things get better...


Lasca


Re: Eloquence of Rose (User Rating: 1 )
by Unaekseveer1 on Wednesday, 11th September 2002 @ 05:21:46 AM AEST
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Hi Amber,
I know what you mean about being all alone! But you are in others thoughts very often, as I hope I am in someones, somewhere!
So even though you feel alone, try not to feel lonely.

Excellent write by the way, you must explain how you do this so often!

With love
Dean (sorry ;-)


Re: Eloquence of Rose (User Rating: 1 )
by Rose on Wednesday, 11th September 2002 @ 07:42:07 AM AEST
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thank you for the comment. I should be more thankful for all the other comments made to me on my writes. I guess this time around, I'm just cannot seem to chase this feeling out of the way, so I can move on. Its like he/the feelings are holding me, just waiting... yet, he is as if I am not there, ever since I did this, he cannot even speak to me, barely. That is why, i wonder what is wrong with me, and what I did, or just so foolish... Thanks for the nice comments. Amber Rose :)


Re: Eloquence of Rose (User Rating: 1 )
by Rose on Monday, 16th September 2002 @ 07:43:21 AM AEST
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Hi Dean,
I seem to be having one heck of a hardware, internet problem, with MSN and a medical site. I cannot get on them for nothing!! so I will respond here. I am having a dark moment, or should I say moments in my life of this time. Must be bad karma or somethng, just know its not well. I am praying for more positive thinking, for i sure need it. I hope you have found new dwellings? not sure if you have or not. I hope all is going well, and how was your special day of growing older by one year!!!
later......AmberRose :)


Re: Eloquence of Rose (User Rating: 1 )
by Sarah22 on Saturday, 7th December 2002 @ 11:08:19 PM AEST
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lovely poem :*)




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