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Array ( [sid] => 3550 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Temptation Forever [time] => 2002-09-08 14:39:29 [hometext] => Angry Period In My Life [bodytext] => Grew up in the church so where is the lord
Isn’t he supposed to come and gimme more
Than I could ever ask for…not that funky *** whore
What happened to the promise of a golden life
What happened to the picture perfect golden wife
What happened to the life full of love I once had
That’s the mother ***** ***** I want back
I feel condemned to always wanna be him
And then lose any friend that has a hand to lend
‘Cuz I send them away like an ugly gremlin
But I’ve become uglier than a gremlin
I’m like the fire of hell I suck up others and swell
With the more hatred that I get
Tha more I spit this ***** wit an uncanny ability
To lure you in with the talk of sin
I was lured out with the same temptation
This nation has so much immorality to offer
Why bother trying to stand up for what’s superior in existence
You can keep your distance and still persistant in surviving
And still striving to drag others down in assistance with the evil
That has swept you over and ruined you forever
[comments] => 1 [counter] => 146 [topic] => 6 [informant] => PhewNo [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )
Temptation Forever

Contributed by PhewNo on Sunday, 8th September 2002 @ 02:39:29 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



Grew up in the church so where is the lord
Isn’t he supposed to come and gimme more
Than I could ever ask for…not that funky *** whore
What happened to the promise of a golden life
What happened to the picture perfect golden wife
What happened to the life full of love I once had
That’s the mother ***** ***** I want back
I feel condemned to always wanna be him
And then lose any friend that has a hand to lend
‘Cuz I send them away like an ugly gremlin
But I’ve become uglier than a gremlin
I’m like the fire of hell I suck up others and swell
With the more hatred that I get
Tha more I spit this ***** wit an uncanny ability
To lure you in with the talk of sin
I was lured out with the same temptation
This nation has so much immorality to offer
Why bother trying to stand up for what’s superior in existence
You can keep your distance and still persistant in surviving
And still striving to drag others down in assistance with the evil
That has swept you over and ruined you forever




Copyright © PhewNo ... [ 2002-09-08 14:39:29]
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Re: Temptation Forever (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Monday, 12th May 2003 @ 09:16:40 AM AEST
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great write, clearly can feel your anger.
well done




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