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Array ( [sid] => 35446 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Skin Burst [time] => 2004-02-18 18:39:02 [hometext] => Gah.... this poem is very bad... I wrote it very fast after reading the work of one of my friends... and only to prove myself not as inferior. Though I think I made it work... geyah.. [bodytext] => Skin over sinew and muscle
Taught over black veins with storms flowing through
Pale over delicate joints
Thin over glassy eyes
Too much of this skin
Took some off, let it shed
Thick blade on pale skin
Catches the dim light hitting glassy eyes
Sending shocks through arteries
Sucking tears down an ugly, ugly face
Skin over sinew and muscle parts
Snaps over black veins
Simpy disconnects from the joints

Floats in the sun ray like fairy dust. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 176 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Suz [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Skin Burst

Contributed by Suz on Wednesday, 18th February 2004 @ 06:39:02 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Skin over sinew and muscle
Taught over black veins with storms flowing through
Pale over delicate joints
Thin over glassy eyes
Too much of this skin
Took some off, let it shed
Thick blade on pale skin
Catches the dim light hitting glassy eyes
Sending shocks through arteries
Sucking tears down an ugly, ugly face
Skin over sinew and muscle parts
Snaps over black veins
Simpy disconnects from the joints

Floats in the sun ray like fairy dust.

Copyright © Suz ... [ 2004-02-18 18:39:02]
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Re: Skin Burst (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Wednesday, 18th February 2004 @ 09:05:24 PM AEST
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A graphic dictation of life, Had a good flow to but I was a little lost as to the final line.
But all in all it was a good write.

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