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Array ( [sid] => 35283 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I Care [time] => 2004-02-17 02:49:55 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I care

Feb 12, 04
8:37 pm
finsh at 11:34 pm

I know the words that comes out my mouth sound careless but when I speak I never wanted my words to hurt I never meant for them to be a knife to u but your comfort

U don't notice now but I care

I care about your feelin, heart, mind and soul

I can't explain you but I know I care about u I know I want u in my heart and life I want u to see the inside of me

U don't notice now but I care I can't or don't know how to show it but I do

The day I hear your voice I care the first day I saw your picture I care

Cause u so blind by your false thoughts of me, u don't see

U don't notice that u are the first man that I want to give my, heart, soul, and body to

So I care when I talk to u even a fraction of a second time stop my time stop. Their shouldn't be any reasonable doubts

U need to stop playin the blind man games because I care
I care so much it hurt me more then poundin knife at my heart

I care
I always did

I care so much that it killing me
I care
I care

[comments] => 3 [counter] => 293 [topic] => 50 [informant] => Remi [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => ApologyPoetry )
I Care

Contributed by Remi on Tuesday, 17th February 2004 @ 02:49:55 AM in AEST
Topic: ApologyPoetry



I care

Feb 12, 04
8:37 pm
finsh at 11:34 pm

I know the words that comes out my mouth sound careless but when I speak I never wanted my words to hurt I never meant for them to be a knife to u but your comfort

U don't notice now but I care

I care about your feelin, heart, mind and soul

I can't explain you but I know I care about u I know I want u in my heart and life I want u to see the inside of me

U don't notice now but I care I can't or don't know how to show it but I do

The day I hear your voice I care the first day I saw your picture I care

Cause u so blind by your false thoughts of me, u don't see

U don't notice that u are the first man that I want to give my, heart, soul, and body to

So I care when I talk to u even a fraction of a second time stop my time stop. Their shouldn't be any reasonable doubts

U need to stop playin the blind man games because I care
I care so much it hurt me more then poundin knife at my heart

I care
I always did

I care so much that it killing me
I care
I care





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Re: I Care (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 17th February 2004 @ 03:38:40 AM AEST
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Sad but beautifull!
good write!
luv, huggs,
emy


Re: I Care (User Rating: 1 )
by a_bear on Tuesday, 17th February 2004 @ 07:21:44 AM AEST
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caring hurts, doesn't it? I enjoyed the poetry...I hope when Spring comes, happiness will bloom like new buds on a tree, and hurt fall away like dead leaves...
a_bear



Re: I Care (User Rating: 1 )
by fldadn1 on Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 01:24:59 AM AEST
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Don't forget to care for yourself ive made that mistake and it still hurts till this day. Well good write though.




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