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Array ( [sid] => 35001 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Outside lover [time] => 2004-02-14 18:16:49 [hometext] => [bodytext] => the comic shows
are but a quick fix,
a 125 shot of happiness
quick to go, and light in effect.
the thought of loneliness
is all that lingers.
never to love
or to hate
to be stuck, alone.
dead affection
for someone that doesnt know i care
we play the stupid games.
who do you like
dont lie
i know you like someone...
this game is endless
and breathless
i would stop if i wasnt scared.
thoughts ring out
a supersonic silence looping in my ears:
TELL HER HOW YOU FEEL
BUT, THEN AGAIN
WHY BOTHER, SHES TOO MUCH
SHE WONT FEEL THE SAME
WHY WOULD SHE LOVE ME
EVEN IF SHE DID IT WOULD BE OUT OF PITTY.
make it stop.
it's too loud, filling my ears
with the harsh reminder of the burden i carry [comments] => 2 [counter] => 198 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Strat [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Outside lover

Contributed by Strat on Saturday, 14th February 2004 @ 06:16:49 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

the comic shows
are but a quick fix,
a 125 shot of happiness
quick to go, and light in effect.
the thought of loneliness
is all that lingers.
never to love
or to hate
to be stuck, alone.
dead affection
for someone that doesnt know i care
we play the stupid games.
who do you like
dont lie
i know you like someone...
this game is endless
and breathless
i would stop if i wasnt scared.
thoughts ring out
a supersonic silence looping in my ears:
TELL HER HOW YOU FEEL
BUT, THEN AGAIN
WHY BOTHER, SHES TOO MUCH
SHE WONT FEEL THE SAME
WHY WOULD SHE LOVE ME
EVEN IF SHE DID IT WOULD BE OUT OF PITTY.
make it stop.
it's too loud, filling my ears
with the harsh reminder of the burden i carry

Copyright © Strat ... [ 2004-02-14 18:16:49]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Outside lover (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 14th February 2004 @ 09:50:47 PM AEST
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hey i really liked this poem. it showed how you really felt about this person. you shold write more if you ome across an insperation.
love-b.l.m

Re: Outside lover (User Rating: 1 )
by Merry on Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 09:57:06 PM AEST
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such insecuirty exposed - an excellent write

a universal topic and we have all experienced it to one degree or another -
enjoyed your work very much

merry

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