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Array ( [sid] => 34908 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Discarded Love [time] => 2004-02-13 23:24:00 [hometext] => The day of love is near, but for those of us (me) alone yet again. Our love feels discarded. [bodytext] =>
Bleak midwinter
And snow lies all around
My heart is cold and empty

And I long to walk on the hot sand
With the sun burning my body
And my love close at hand
Will you ever return?
Or will I always live in bleak midwinter

Send me word of where you are
Have you found a new love?
Have you moved on to someone new?

I am still in a frozen state
Stuck rigid where you left me
Unable to move on
One kiss would thaw my bones
One moment of bliss would unfreeze my toes

I would follow you to the ends of the earth
But my feet are frozen to the ground
And all around there is no sound

In this frozen wilderness
I will live forever
Suspended in time

A monument to discarded love [comments] => 3 [counter] => 330 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Disenchanted_Poet [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Discarded Love

Contributed by Disenchanted_Poet on Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 11:24:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Bleak midwinter
And snow lies all around
My heart is cold and empty

And I long to walk on the hot sand
With the sun burning my body
And my love close at hand
Will you ever return?
Or will I always live in bleak midwinter

Send me word of where you are
Have you found a new love?
Have you moved on to someone new?

I am still in a frozen state
Stuck rigid where you left me
Unable to move on
One kiss would thaw my bones
One moment of bliss would unfreeze my toes

I would follow you to the ends of the earth
But my feet are frozen to the ground
And all around there is no sound

In this frozen wilderness
I will live forever
Suspended in time

A monument to discarded love

Copyright © Disenchanted_Poet ... [ 2004-02-13 23:24:00]
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Re: Discarded Love (User Rating: 1 )
by blueheart on Saturday, 14th February 2004 @ 01:24:56 AM AEST
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I feel the same way you do. In fact my poem "Valentine's Day for The Lonely" reflects exactly what I'm feeling.

Re: Discarded Love (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Saturday, 14th February 2004 @ 01:41:12 AM AEST
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valentines day is revolting. I loved yer poem and your frequent references to cold. Awesome

Bobo (Joel)

Re: Discarded Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 6th March 2011 @ 11:03:08 AM AEST
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interesting choice of scenery for this poem, i like it

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