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Array ( [sid] => 34569 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Torn two ways [time] => 2004-02-11 00:18:56 [hometext] => i'm sorta in love with two people, and it kills me that i cannot find it within myself to decide on who to give my full affection to. I want someone else, but i also am madly in love with the person i'm with now.... [bodytext] => in a city of lovers
i'm a man torn in two
the love of another
or the love for you

cast away your shadows
hidden your face
i know you cant hear me
but listen any way

you......
i thought you loved me
but you.....
never heard me
and you.....
just out of reach
and i
i've always loved you.........

the thought of your memory
replays in my dreams
a lovers tale
a lovers life
broken at the seams

The perfect fantasy
floating away
was it me
was it you
it was never there to say

Summer days and summer nights
lived out in bed
the romance of it all
was it just dead

could i have been there
for you more
is this your way of
settling some score

you......
i thought you loved me
but you.....
never heard me
and you.....
just out of reach
and i
i've always loved you.........
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 195 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Strat [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
Torn two ways

Contributed by Strat on Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 12:18:56 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



in a city of lovers
i'm a man torn in two
the love of another
or the love for you

cast away your shadows
hidden your face
i know you cant hear me
but listen any way

you......
i thought you loved me
but you.....
never heard me
and you.....
just out of reach
and i
i've always loved you.........

the thought of your memory
replays in my dreams
a lovers tale
a lovers life
broken at the seams

The perfect fantasy
floating away
was it me
was it you
it was never there to say

Summer days and summer nights
lived out in bed
the romance of it all
was it just dead

could i have been there
for you more
is this your way of
settling some score

you......
i thought you loved me
but you.....
never heard me
and you.....
just out of reach
and i
i've always loved you.........




Copyright © Strat ... [ 2004-02-11 00:18:56]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Torn two ways (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 08:27:18 AM AEST
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well written. venkat


Re: Torn two ways (User Rating: 1 )
by Rain on Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 01:33:25 AM AEST
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this poem reminds me of a spiderweb so pretty it draws you in and keeps your mind within its crasp tangled in its words. great write in other words.
~sara~


Re: Torn two ways (User Rating: 1 )
by Rain on Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 01:33:45 AM AEST
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this poem reminds me of a spiderweb so pretty it draws you in and keeps your mind within its crasp tangled in its words. great write in other words.
~sara~


Re: Torn two ways (User Rating: 1 )
by Strat on Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 08:42:58 PM AEST
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i've written music to it, i wish i could share it with you, if anyone has any ideas, let me know....




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