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Array ( [sid] => 34318 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => all that i am [time] => 2004-02-08 20:56:42 [hometext] => Song lyrics. I guess. First try. Hit me as hard as you can! [bodytext] => A little bit of what I am
What you always try to damn
You hate the way I try live
This is all I have to give

So sick of the b/s you try to pull
Let’s have it out one last duel
You want to fight this all I got
This what I am every thing your not

Chorus: I so sick of this! Time to fight
Let’s end this now this very night
You hate all I am
Am I the one you want to damn?
End Chorus

So this is what it comes down to
This is all your going to do
Like I said this is what I’ve got
Here I am everything you not

Chorus repeats

This is were my hell ends
This sad tell where you life bends
This is everything you’ve got
You’re everything that I am not.
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 222 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Shadow [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

all that i am

Contributed by Shadow on Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 08:56:42 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

A little bit of what I am
What you always try to damn
You hate the way I try live
This is all I have to give

So sick of the b/s you try to pull
Let’s have it out one last duel
You want to fight this all I got
This what I am every thing your not

Chorus: I so sick of this! Time to fight
Let’s end this now this very night
You hate all I am
Am I the one you want to damn?
End Chorus

So this is what it comes down to
This is all your going to do
Like I said this is what I’ve got
Here I am everything you not

Chorus repeats

This is were my hell ends
This sad tell where you life bends
This is everything you’ve got
You’re everything that I am not.

Copyright Â© Shadow ... [ 2004-02-08 20:56:42]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: all that i am (User Rating: 1 )
by outdoorsman on Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 09:10:24 PM AEST
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I like it a lot. "You hate all I am, Am I the one you want to damn?" Strong words that everyone can identify with.

Re: all that i am (User Rating: 1 )
by Jolly on Monday, 9th February 2004 @ 11:59:09 AM AEST
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It always helps me with lyrics If I can catch a beat in my head....this is good, and I like the words. I'm a baby boomer (I guess)...I like Rod Stewart, Celine Dion, my taste is eclectic...I don't care for rap, heavy metal...I like some country, but it always makes me cry...but I recently met someone that wants to take me to an Oz fest....Oh God...my son who is 35 likes "the Oz Man...we might all go together...I'll wear ear plugs and paste a smile on my face...is that hard enough?????

Re: all that i am (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 9th February 2004 @ 10:14:14 PM AEST
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can hear the loud music pounding in my head, i like how your ending switches around too, ~from the me to the you, clever, hugs n' love nessa

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