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Array ( [sid] => 34310 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => You broke My Spirit, You Wounded My Heart [time] => 2004-02-08 18:23:10 [hometext] => [bodytext] => We met for the first time, three years ago,
The warmth and love within me,
Was certainly aglow,
It wasn't long before I knew,
Just where I had to be,
Within your heart I wanted to be,
For all of eternity.

CHORUS
But you broke my spirit,
You wounded my heart,
Took the love I had for you,
Crushed me like a rock.
And still I have this feeling,
Deep within my heart,
That some where deep within you,
Is a man wanting to be loved.

How can I break down the barriers?
That you keep putting up,
All the things you expect of me,
I'm not certain I can cope.

You wanted me to change you,
Baby that change,
Had to come from within.

You drifted away from me,
So many times you did,
Always tricked by fools gold,
Promises of happiness,
A life made up of lies,
All the time you'd speak my name,
And to me you did return.

Well baby that was your worst mistake(spoken)
Cause you burnt me too many times before(spoken)

CHORUS
But you broke my spirit,
You wounded my heart,
Took the love I had for you,
Crushed me like a rock.
And still I have this feeling,
Deep within my heart,
That some where deep within you,
Is a man wanting to be loved.

I can't have you back now,
It's over and it's done,
You broke my heart,
It's broken in two.

But I'll keep on believing,
In my heart and in my mind,
That you're here by my side,
Every single day.

CHORUS
But you broke my spirit,
You wounded my heart,
Took the love I had for you,
Crushed me like a rock.
And still I have this feeling,
Deep within my heart,
That some where deep within you,
Is a man wanting to be loved.
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You broke My Spirit, You Wounded My Heart

Contributed by chrissylee on Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 06:23:10 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

We met for the first time, three years ago,
The warmth and love within me,
Was certainly aglow,
It wasn't long before I knew,
Just where I had to be,
Within your heart I wanted to be,
For all of eternity.

CHORUS
But you broke my spirit,
You wounded my heart,
Took the love I had for you,
Crushed me like a rock.
And still I have this feeling,
Deep within my heart,
That some where deep within you,
Is a man wanting to be loved.

How can I break down the barriers?
That you keep putting up,
All the things you expect of me,
I'm not certain I can cope.

You wanted me to change you,
Baby that change,
Had to come from within.

You drifted away from me,
So many times you did,
Always tricked by fools gold,
Promises of happiness,
A life made up of lies,
All the time you'd speak my name,
And to me you did return.

Well baby that was your worst mistake(spoken)
Cause you burnt me too many times before(spoken)

CHORUS
But you broke my spirit,
You wounded my heart,
Took the love I had for you,
Crushed me like a rock.
And still I have this feeling,
Deep within my heart,
That some where deep within you,
Is a man wanting to be loved.

I can't have you back now,
It's over and it's done,
You broke my heart,
It's broken in two.

But I'll keep on believing,
In my heart and in my mind,
That you're here by my side,
Every single day.

CHORUS
But you broke my spirit,
You wounded my heart,
Took the love I had for you,
Crushed me like a rock.
And still I have this feeling,
Deep within my heart,
That some where deep within you,
Is a man wanting to be loved.

Copyright © chrissylee ... [ 2004-02-08 18:23:10]
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Re: You broke My Spirit, You Wounded My Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by mountainhigh on Monday, 9th February 2004 @ 02:52:59 AM AEST
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I know that path well now, your words read like a history. Thanks for sharing.

Re: You broke My Spirit, You Wounded My Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 10:57:56 PM AEST
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Written like a pro even tho sad.
I can certainly relate to this in a big way.
Hang tuff, luv, huggs,
emy

Re: You broke My Spirit, You Wounded My Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by Valerie_Pearson on Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 05:25:24 PM AEST
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Chrissy,
what a lovely tune, wonderful to see you here also, take care Val

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