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[aid] => mick
[title] => Did you know? (Rewrite)
[time] => 2004-02-06 10:55:26
[hometext] => This version is a little more on the mark.
[bodytext] => We sit on a bench in the courtyard, talking and laughing. I look into your eyes. I love you. Then she walks over. Your eyes light up at the sight of her. You get up and take her hand. You turn to me and say, ‘I’ll see you later, OK?’’ I give you a weak smile in return. I watch the two of you walk away. My eyes fill with tears. Why do you have to love her? I love you. Did you know? [comments] => 0 [counter] => 223 [topic] => 48 [informant] => christyrachelle [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 6 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
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