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Array ( [sid] => 33949 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => You Got MAIL [time] => 2004-02-05 11:08:01 [hometext] => Some people you can do better without... [bodytext] => I have a message for you
And I refuse to hold it inside.
Why are you still sweating me,
when you were the one to say good-bye.
When I was stuck on you, you paid me no attention
Now I have someone new, now you want to mention.
How much you care for me, and how you would do
Right by me and La-La...
What the hells wrong with you?
You think I'm some kind of fool boy,
you think i'm that weak
you cant take care of yourself
So how are you going to take care of me?
Our daughter is our top priority,
And this is something you should know
You never wanted that responsibility
So that's why you had to go. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 250 [topic] => 58 [informant] => Tasha [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 6 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => limericks )

You Got MAIL

Contributed by Tasha on Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 11:08:01 AM in AEST
Topic: limericks

I have a message for you
And I refuse to hold it inside.
Why are you still sweating me,
when you were the one to say good-bye.
When I was stuck on you, you paid me no attention
Now I have someone new, now you want to mention.
How much you care for me, and how you would do
Right by me and La-La...
What the hells wrong with you?
You think I'm some kind of fool boy,
you think i'm that weak
you cant take care of yourself
So how are you going to take care of me?
Our daughter is our top priority,
And this is something you should know
You never wanted that responsibility
So that's why you had to go.

Copyright © Tasha ... [ 2004-02-05 11:08:01]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: You Got MAIL (User Rating: 1 )
by lil_angel on Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 12:21:01 PM AEST
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this is an excellent write....i am glad u have your priorities straight. Keep the poems coming i enjoy reading your work.

Re: You Got MAIL (User Rating: 1 )
by Valerie_Pearson on Monday, 9th February 2004 @ 09:52:20 AM AEST
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Burning words, very deep indeed, take care Val

Re: You Got MAIL (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 11:12:56 PM AEST
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great write.

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