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Array ( [sid] => 33687 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Untitled [time] => 2004-02-03 16:41:06 [hometext] => [bodytext] => He was tall, his hair was dark,
They'd often walked through the park.
Side by side, hand in hand,
She could do nothing but love this man.
His skin was soft,his build was strong,
He had loved her for so long.
For ten years, their relationship did grow,
Until one night, rung the phone.
He picked it up,his heart was torn,
Soon he was running out the door.
Through the night lit by the moon,
This fellow ran til he was blue.
When he finally stopped and looked around,
He was at the park, on the other side of town.
As pictures flashed through his mind,
Not knowing that which he would find,
Feeling short, his hair a mess,
He looked around a corner, and saw them caress.
There he stood for a while,
Watching them walk mile after mile.
This new guy that took his place,
The familiarity of his face,
All drew anger and hate in one,
And made this man become undone.
Again he took to his feet,
An unanticipated death this man did meet. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 157 [topic] => 22 [informant] => amber [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Untitled

Contributed by amber on Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 04:41:06 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

He was tall, his hair was dark,
They'd often walked through the park.
Side by side, hand in hand,
She could do nothing but love this man.
His skin was soft,his build was strong,
He had loved her for so long.
For ten years, their relationship did grow,
Until one night, rung the phone.
He picked it up,his heart was torn,
Soon he was running out the door.
Through the night lit by the moon,
This fellow ran til he was blue.
When he finally stopped and looked around,
He was at the park, on the other side of town.
As pictures flashed through his mind,
Not knowing that which he would find,
Feeling short, his hair a mess,
He looked around a corner, and saw them caress.
There he stood for a while,
Watching them walk mile after mile.
This new guy that took his place,
The familiarity of his face,
All drew anger and hate in one,
And made this man become undone.
Again he took to his feet,
An unanticipated death this man did meet.

Copyright © amber ... [ 2004-02-03 16:41:06]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by Putteragain on Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 05:26:36 PM AEST
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and again good but sad
michelle

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