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Trying to swallow my fear of death
But it won't go away.

It won't stop haunting
My dreams at night

It won't stop following me
Around by day or night.

Why does Death have to be so
Secretive why can't it just come
And get me and then take me away.

Tears running down my face
Trying to swallow my fear of death
But it won't go away.

It won't stop haunting
Me and following me around
Everywhere that I go.

They tell me that I have god
In my life but is he really here
For me when I really need him the most.

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Tears

Contributed by lildrama04 on Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 03:28:35 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Tears running down my face
Trying to swallow my fear of death
But it won't go away.

It won't stop haunting
My dreams at night

It won't stop following me
Around by day or night.

Why does Death have to be so
Secretive why can't it just come
And get me and then take me away.

Tears running down my face
Trying to swallow my fear of death
But it won't go away.

It won't stop haunting
Me and following me around
Everywhere that I go.

They tell me that I have god
In my life but is he really here
For me when I really need him the most.

Copyright © lildrama04 ... [ 2004-02-03 15:28:35]
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Re: Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by Solmyr1404 on Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 03:34:04 PM AEST
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good poem. i liked it a lot. and your line They tell me that I have god
In my life but is he really here
For me when I really need him the most.
He really is there, when you need him and when you don't realize you need him.

Re: Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 03:54:36 PM AEST
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I LIKE THIS POEM. EVERYONE THAT BELIEVES IN GOD HAS GOD WITH HIM

Re: Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by MariaXsoccerXrock on Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 04:22:35 PM AEST
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Good work. from the previous poster...is right, God will be there for you when you need him.

Re: Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by norticus on Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 10:34:51 AM AEST
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You sure are bummed out a lot. I give the poem a 2.8 on the Nortiscale.
norticus

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