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as I run my fingers
through your soft hair.
Smile touches your lips
as my hand finds your face.
Loving every second
that you sleep in my arms.
Awoken by a gentle
sunrise that lovingly
kisses your eyes open
to the day that would
start the rest of
our lives together.
'Til death and beyond would
be husband and wife.

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Roses in her hair

Contributed by Cobalt on Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 12:37:34 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

Your lips gently caress
as I run my fingers
through your soft hair.
Smile touches your lips
as my hand finds your face.
Loving every second
that you sleep in my arms.
Awoken by a gentle
sunrise that lovingly
kisses your eyes open
to the day that would
start the rest of
our lives together.
'Til death and beyond would
be husband and wife.

Raven's Sin

Copyright © Cobalt ... [ 2004-02-03 00:37:34]
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Re: Roses in her hair (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 01:02:46 AM AEST
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most romantic..very nicely written. venkat

Re: Roses in her hair (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 01:15:29 AM AEST
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So beautifully done,Romantic! Christina

Re: Roses in her hair (User Rating: 1 )
by Jolly on Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 04:28:55 AM AEST
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hmmmmm. mmmmmmmm Cobalt you say? but inside I sense something softer that wants to get out...this is very nice. I could almost like you...if fighting weren't so much fun.
jolly @};-

Re: Roses in her hair (User Rating: 1 )
by norm on Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 06:49:18 PM AEST
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Soft and yielding to the eyes
---------------------------------------
I think such love by you expressed,
You took the need and you addressed,
But no one here can be too sure,
The girl for you her love endure

Re: Roses in her hair (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 4th February 2004 @ 05:31:53 AM AEST
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Wow, so beautifull. I'm sure she cherishes this.
Verry good.
luv, huggs,
emy

Re: Roses in her hair (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Wednesday, 4th February 2004 @ 10:23:28 PM AEST
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very nice Jeff.... soft and beautifully written.

Re: Roses in her hair (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 01:44:13 AM AEST
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great title, sweet mellow poem, *love the dreamy note*, leaves a vivid image in my mind:) hugs n' love nessa

Re: Roses in her hair (User Rating: 1 )
by Merry on Friday, 6th February 2004 @ 01:15:38 PM AEST
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such a warm love poem - like a soft caress, a gentle kiss - what a romantic guy you are.

smiles
merry

Re: Roses in her hair (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Friday, 6th February 2004 @ 05:22:36 PM AEST
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Jeff!! Is this you?? I can't believe it!! This is one of my favs now..I really love the softness in this.....this is a side of you I haven't seen...
Hugs
Jenni

Re: Roses in her hair (User Rating: 1 )
by Necromant on Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 04:27:09 PM AEST
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Awww this is very romantic! *Shakes head* was getting dreamy :p Amazing poem written with lot of care! The lady who owns your heart is one of the luckiest persons in the world! Beautiful!
Anne :D

Re: Roses in her hair (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 08:05:39 PM AEST
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That was a masterpiece! Very well done
Larry

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