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Array ( [sid] => 33390 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Save my LIfe [time] => 2004-02-01 01:35:49 [hometext] => [bodytext] => She's back on drugs again
Even though she knows it ain't right
She can't even call up her friends
And say "help me save my life"
She's so ashamed of herself that she's come full circle
Nobody understands what it's like to
Be this girl
So she disappeared, and she
Wasn't clear, and she
Didn't say where she was going

Save my life, won't you help me
Save my life, won't you help me
Save my life, won't you hear me
Save my life, won't you help me

She had the man of her dreams
And some success
And she was so happy, and looking well
It was this one dark night, that she
Slipped
And then the next morning that she
Felt like a piece of *****
So she's hanging out, and she's
With the crowd, and she's
Travelin' where the wind is blowing

Save my life, won't you help me
Save my life, won't you help me
Save my life, won't you hear me
Save my life, won't you help me

And he's a real good guy and he
Wants to save her 'cause he's
More than been there all before
And she's so confused and his heart is breaking and he
Dreams she's knocking on his door

Save my life, won't you help me
Save my life, won't you help me
Save my life, won't you hear me
Save my life, won't you help me
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Save my LIfe

Contributed by ml03 on Sunday, 1st February 2004 @ 01:35:49 AM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics



She's back on drugs again
Even though she knows it ain't right
She can't even call up her friends
And say "help me save my life"
She's so ashamed of herself that she's come full circle
Nobody understands what it's like to
Be this girl
So she disappeared, and she
Wasn't clear, and she
Didn't say where she was going

Save my life, won't you help me
Save my life, won't you help me
Save my life, won't you hear me
Save my life, won't you help me

She had the man of her dreams
And some success
And she was so happy, and looking well
It was this one dark night, that she
Slipped
And then the next morning that she
Felt like a piece of *****
So she's hanging out, and she's
With the crowd, and she's
Travelin' where the wind is blowing

Save my life, won't you help me
Save my life, won't you help me
Save my life, won't you hear me
Save my life, won't you help me

And he's a real good guy and he
Wants to save her 'cause he's
More than been there all before
And she's so confused and his heart is breaking and he
Dreams she's knocking on his door

Save my life, won't you help me
Save my life, won't you help me
Save my life, won't you hear me
Save my life, won't you help me




Copyright © ml03 ... [ 2004-02-01 01:35:49]
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Re: Save my LIfe (User Rating: 1 )
by abnormal on Sunday, 1st February 2004 @ 02:03:00 AM AEST
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Jesus can save your life


Re: Save my LIfe (User Rating: 1 )
by Letting_Go on Sunday, 1st February 2004 @ 02:12:31 AM AEST
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Oh just one choice one decision can change that persons life and the life of the people around them. Heart breaking this poem. Pictured real life for some people. Good job.


Re: Save my LIfe (User Rating: 1 )
by ml03 on Sunday, 1st February 2004 @ 03:46:30 AM AEST
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i didn't write this, its a song by Pink off her new album Try This


Re: Save my LIfe (User Rating: 1 )
by glitter_and_corpsepaint on Tuesday, 10th February 2004 @ 01:08:57 AM AEST
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man, that was beautiful. i don't know what else to say. ***** awesome piece.




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