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Array ( [sid] => 32878 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Love stuck in a heart that dont want it [time] => 2004-01-27 12:57:43 [hometext] => Just through this one together. The pains of love seem to continue to reside with in me, so to get them out I wrote this. Not one of my best, but off the top of my head. Hope you all like this one.. MaJ [bodytext] => -------_______--------

When I would get ahead, you continue to enter my mind,
Now I am bound by this life you left behind,
Your face still haunts my one pleasant dreams,
Your voice has chased away all the sanity in me.

You presence still lingers here, and wont leave me alone,
You pulled me down, and I can not seem to find my home,
I once showed you all my cares,
And admitted to you my childish fears.

I tried to kill this pain,
Yet it continues to come back again and again,
I know the truth now, and I know who you are,
Can't you understand I dont want to love you anymore?

Immobilized by my fears,
Soon to be blinded by my tears,
I can stop this pain if I will it away,
But you continue to torment my soul each and every day.

Fallen angels at my feet,
Whispered voices in my ear,
Death of your love before my eyes,
Dying next to me, lying next to my fears.

I did so much for you,
Thousands of tears I have cried,
Screaming, Deceiving, and bleeding for you,
Now this love should understand it has died.

Let me move on and live my life full,
My heart no longer needs your tourmented words,
Leave if you must, but don't treat me the fool,
I feel this deception running through me like wild herds.

Heal the pain, fix the heart, Let me have my fun,
This love is lost, and I dont want it back,
I open my heart and am the Shadow on the Sun,
I close my heart to you, cause yours is one of the color black.

I once wanted you for all time,
Now I no longer want you any more,
Leave me be, your love is now like a dime,
Lost between the cracks in the wooden floor.

[comments] => 2 [counter] => 436 [topic] => 22 [informant] => MajesticPoet [notes] => (Edited by Mod_1 as requested) [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
Love stuck in a heart that dont want it

Contributed by MajesticPoet on Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 12:57:43 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



-------_______--------

When I would get ahead, you continue to enter my mind,
Now I am bound by this life you left behind,
Your face still haunts my one pleasant dreams,
Your voice has chased away all the sanity in me.

You presence still lingers here, and wont leave me alone,
You pulled me down, and I can not seem to find my home,
I once showed you all my cares,
And admitted to you my childish fears.

I tried to kill this pain,
Yet it continues to come back again and again,
I know the truth now, and I know who you are,
Can't you understand I dont want to love you anymore?

Immobilized by my fears,
Soon to be blinded by my tears,
I can stop this pain if I will it away,
But you continue to torment my soul each and every day.

Fallen angels at my feet,
Whispered voices in my ear,
Death of your love before my eyes,
Dying next to me, lying next to my fears.

I did so much for you,
Thousands of tears I have cried,
Screaming, Deceiving, and bleeding for you,
Now this love should understand it has died.

Let me move on and live my life full,
My heart no longer needs your tourmented words,
Leave if you must, but don't treat me the fool,
I feel this deception running through me like wild herds.

Heal the pain, fix the heart, Let me have my fun,
This love is lost, and I dont want it back,
I open my heart and am the Shadow on the Sun,
I close my heart to you, cause yours is one of the color black.

I once wanted you for all time,
Now I no longer want you any more,
Leave me be, your love is now like a dime,
Lost between the cracks in the wooden floor.





Copyright © MajesticPoet ... [ 2004-01-27 12:57:43]
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Re: Love stuck in a heart that dont want it (User Rating: 1 )
by Night_Child on Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 01:02:13 PM AEST
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Very good poem...though I noticed alot of lines from the Evanesence song My Immortal, though I'm not at all implying you got them from there it was a mere observation.


Re: Love stuck in a heart that dont want it (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 12:22:35 AM AEST
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You still made it your own by the end. I think you did a good job with this one too. Nice.




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