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Array ( [sid] => 32753 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Cold Kiss [time] => 2004-01-26 10:23:44 [hometext] => This is the first poem in Raven's Sin.... [bodytext] => For a thousand years
I died and slept
Yet for all of my tears
I know you never wept
For all I’ve ever known
For all you’ve never shown
For all words unsaid
I know it’s going away
A thousand times I died
A million tears that fell
So many years ago
I lost my soul to you
You took it all from me
With a sadistic smile
Plastered across your face
Now I see the setting sun
It calls to me in its shadow
Tasted the insanity
So blissful in the dark
Now I cut my throat
Screaming out those names
Knowing all my life is failed
Loving only this blade
Kissing my flesh
With cold little kisses
Soft and gentle
No matter how deep
The only thing that has
Always loved me
In my life
Is what takes it
In the end.

Raven's Sin [comments] => 11 [counter] => 241 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Cobalt [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 1 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
Cold Kiss

Contributed by Cobalt on Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 10:23:44 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



For a thousand years
I died and slept
Yet for all of my tears
I know you never wept
For all I’ve ever known
For all you’ve never shown
For all words unsaid
I know it’s going away
A thousand times I died
A million tears that fell
So many years ago
I lost my soul to you
You took it all from me
With a sadistic smile
Plastered across your face
Now I see the setting sun
It calls to me in its shadow
Tasted the insanity
So blissful in the dark
Now I cut my throat
Screaming out those names
Knowing all my life is failed
Loving only this blade
Kissing my flesh
With cold little kisses
Soft and gentle
No matter how deep
The only thing that has
Always loved me
In my life
Is what takes it
In the end.

Raven's Sin



Copyright © Cobalt ... [ 2004-01-26 10:23:44]
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Re: Cold Kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 10:45:08 AM AEST
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Wow... dark but very well written... :)


Re: Cold Kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by Necromant on Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 10:49:54 AM AEST
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Geeze! This poem is really powerful! Heh I'm left speechless.......wow wonderful! Very deep and emotional I loved it! Keep it up!
Anne :D


Re: Cold Kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by mercedes on Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 11:07:50 AM AEST
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I like this one, can't wait for the next.


Re: Cold Kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 12:15:23 PM AEST
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I agree very dark but written like a pro.
huggs, luv,
emy


Re: Cold Kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 12:51:11 PM AEST
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That one is definately a "goosebumperedy" one.....felt them all through the whole poem.
The places you take my mind Jeff....and then just leave me there......what a great write you just created......Raven's Sin will be a Lair for poets of all kinds to read!
Sure glad you invited me in....I'll follow...you always lead!
Really good poem Jeff! But then they all are!
consue


Re: Cold Kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by Putteragain on Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 03:23:43 PM AEST
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you know for a dark poem i liked it alot you do have away of drawing the reader in and then just leaving us you are such a great poet
uummmm yeah thats it

Michelle


Re: Cold Kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by pain_and_tears on Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 04:55:03 PM AEST
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That's what i feel like like all of the time... it is dark and wonderful,


Re: Cold Kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by RochelleLloyd on Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 11:21:48 PM AEST
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wonderfully written


Re: Cold Kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by afraid_of_fear on Thursday, 29th January 2004 @ 03:58:11 PM AEST
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wow! this is so beautiful.. the ending is perfect..
charlotte x_x_x


Re: Cold Kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on Sunday, 1st February 2004 @ 12:29:29 AM AEST
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Wow I love this! It's almost... enchanting, in a way. Just the way it sounds in my head gives me shivers. Awesome write!!

~ Moonlit


Re: Cold Kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by cryingonmyporch on Monday, 2nd February 2004 @ 11:52:52 PM AEST
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Very very cool.
~Amy




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