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[sid] => 32607
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => Silent Kiss
[time] => 2004-01-24 18:50:44
[hometext] => This is the final poem of The Faulty Phoenix. It's a bit on the 'soft' side so be gentle LOL.
[bodytext] => Every time I think about you
I know you are where I belong.
Looking deep into your eyes
is just like and angels sigh.
Seeing how your hair flows
gently over your soft shoulders.
Holding you close in my heart
on a blanket under starry skies.
Your soft lips and gentle words
softly whisper I love you to me.
Every time we ran through
those golden fields just so we
could tumble to the ground together.
Your love so intense it was
a grand eclipse of loving life.
In each others arms every
hope was lived and every
dream was real and true.
Satin sheets where I caressed
your body with a red rose.
Your upturned face always
waiting for my tender kiss.
Waiting for my, 'I'll love you forever'.
The faulty phoenix
[comments] => 15
[counter] => 214
[topic] => 43
[informant] => Cobalt
[notes] => (Edited by Mod_1 for typo)
[ihome] => 0
[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
[haspoll] => 0
[pollID] => 0
[score] => 5
[ratings] => 1
[editpoem] => 0
[associated] =>
[topicname] => oops
)
Silent Kiss
Contributed by
Cobalt
on
Saturday, 24th January 2004 @ 06:50:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Every time I think about you
I know you are where I belong.
Looking deep into your eyes
is just like and angels sigh.
Seeing how your hair flows
gently over your soft shoulders.
Holding you close in my heart
on a blanket under starry skies.
Your soft lips and gentle words
softly whisper I love you to me.
Every time we ran through
those golden fields just so we
could tumble to the ground together.
Your love so intense it was
a grand eclipse of loving life.
In each others arms every
hope was lived and every
dream was real and true.
Satin sheets where I caressed
your body with a red rose.
Your upturned face always
waiting for my tender kiss.
Waiting for my, 'I'll love you forever'.
The faulty phoenix
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Cobalt
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2004-01-24 18:50:44]
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Re: Silent Kiss
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 24th January 2004 @ 07:01:10 PM AEST
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| very sweet loving write, i love your style and gentle flow in these phoenix poems, hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Silent Kiss
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by Kie on
Saturday, 24th January 2004 @ 07:18:16 PM AEST
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Very romantic. Ah, the magic of being in love.
Kie |
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Re: Silent Kiss
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by MoonlitAngel on
Saturday, 24th January 2004 @ 07:39:53 PM AEST
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That's so sweet and romantic! "In each others arms every hope was lived and every dream was real and true" - does it get any better than that??
I didn't think so. LOL. You're making me all.. wistful, over here... lol... stop it! :P
~ Moonlit |
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Re: Silent Kiss
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by gery_giggles on
Saturday, 24th January 2004 @ 08:20:28 PM AEST
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aww.....this was sweet.....i liked it alot...makes me feel all bublly inside^_^
luv always |
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Re: Silent Kiss
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by dolly_dagger on
Saturday, 24th January 2004 @ 08:22:14 PM AEST
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| i agree with moonlit. this is a really nice poem and reminds me that some guys do have feelings like this and it's not just me imagining it. |
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Re: Silent Kiss
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by Silhouette on
Saturday, 24th January 2004 @ 08:23:46 PM AEST
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| Flat-out beautiful. |
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Re: Silent Kiss
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Saturday, 24th January 2004 @ 10:43:26 PM AEST
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I'm gonna have to agree with moonlit's comment about this making her feel wistful. it's having the same effect on me....
just gorgeous jeff.... :)
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Re: Silent Kiss
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by DreamWeaver on
Sunday, 25th January 2004 @ 04:45:22 AM AEST
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| Tender and romantic ... a nice end to your book of poems ... Jan |
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Re: Silent Kiss
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by Vitreous_Soul on
Sunday, 25th January 2004 @ 07:04:37 AM AEST
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Awesome. We all have a lighter side. Everything was worded perfectly, this is definitely an accomplishment.
Truly,
-V.S. |
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Re: Silent Kiss
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by venkat on
Sunday, 25th January 2004 @ 07:10:01 AM AEST
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| Tender and beautifully romantic.. venkat |
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Re: Silent Kiss
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by mercedes on
Sunday, 25th January 2004 @ 12:49:25 PM AEST
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| I have to agree with all the above comments. Its very beautiful. |
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Re: Silent Kiss
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by bobotheclown on
Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 02:28:57 AM AEST
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this was great dude absolutely lovely. I wish I could change from always writing dark poetry and make it awesome as you so always do, but oh well my talent is not as great as yours. I loved it all buddy.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Silent Kiss
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by Necromant on
Thursday, 29th January 2004 @ 08:21:52 PM AEST
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Oh what a light hearted write, I'm glad to read this after 'one last black rose'. Very romantic and passionate, loved it immediately, re read it few times and it left me with a sweet taste of love and hope :). Very good written, hope to see more light hearted poems from you, hate to see you sad :D
Anne :D |
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Re: Silent Kiss
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by Destiny on
Friday, 30th January 2004 @ 12:54:06 PM AEST
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Very sweet, now if there were about 3 million other guys who think like you do we girls would be in heaven
much love
Des |
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Re: Silent Kiss
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by Jolly on
Monday, 2nd February 2004 @ 10:31:53 PM AEST
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| Ohhhhh I like you more and more. Someone just asked me what my idea of romance was and one thing I listed was being caressed on the nape of the neck and down my back with the soft petals of a rose.....Cobalt this is wonderful and so much better (to me) then that dark stuff....makes me yearn to be young and blonde.... |
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