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Array ( [sid] => 32390 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => i am finally glad [time] => 2004-01-22 12:57:54 [hometext] => this is about a friend who was going out with this loser and she finally realized when she dumped him... i was right all along! [bodytext] => finally you did it
finally said go
only hoping he would say no
no was not the word
that came from his mouth
ok was what you heard
not even a doubt
"crusty *****, ugly whore"
happiness was what you longed for
cheating is what he did
through out the 17 months,
he just told her of her he should of got rid
"i couldnt break up with you, i'd feel bad"
but now in the dark,
who will he make so sad?
finally you did it
"dawg"
you dumped that ****
finally!
your not his little *****
He was not right for you,
and you know
finally you dumped the ****
and told him so
"My virginity was lost,"
was what you said
"Yes i loved you, but your virginity was what i wanted instead"
"your sex didnt mean anything, it was just for fun"
Hearing that made your walls cave in
"i lost my virginity, and now i see why i didnt ***?"
"i lost my virginity, for your fun? for you didnt even love me, i cant believe it was just for ***.
me hearing this on the phone,
me wanting to die so my friend can live,
all i could do was just moan.
then he heard me and said
"i know your there"
"yes i am and you hurt my best friend very bad."
"i dont give a *****, bout that *****,
i dont even care if she is **** mad"
"I cheated on you the past 17 months, now ***** go cry."
"ha ha ha ha ha
you skank"
i couldnt believe i was hearing this,
feeling so bad my heart began to ache.
"you cheated on me the whole time,
i cant even believe that i thought you woudl of always been mine."
"how could you do that, and even when i wanted to die?"
your depresion really got worse,
i cant believe it,
all he ever did was curse.
"we have made and impact on each other"
"good, bad- happy, sad.
"why the hell would i even bother to remember?"
"i hate you oh so much,
you cheated on me with many girls,
then u call ME ****"
i dont get that what does he mean,
calling her a ****
when he does those gross things!
He is a *** ***,
and we all know.
when ever they were in public,
he would commet on guys, u know.
What a ****, that what he is.
yay for my friend, she id happy
"***** stay out of our biz,
its not even about you"
Finally you did it,
you finally said GO!



[comments] => 1 [counter] => 154 [topic] => 24 [informant] => dena [notes] => ..... Edited by mod_6 for language...22-01-04 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LoveRemembered )
i am finally glad

Contributed by dena on Thursday, 22nd January 2004 @ 12:57:54 PM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered



finally you did it
finally said go
only hoping he would say no
no was not the word
that came from his mouth
ok was what you heard
not even a doubt
"crusty *****, ugly whore"
happiness was what you longed for
cheating is what he did
through out the 17 months,
he just told her of her he should of got rid
"i couldnt break up with you, i'd feel bad"
but now in the dark,
who will he make so sad?
finally you did it
"dawg"
you dumped that ****
finally!
your not his little *****
He was not right for you,
and you know
finally you dumped the ****
and told him so
"My virginity was lost,"
was what you said
"Yes i loved you, but your virginity was what i wanted instead"
"your sex didnt mean anything, it was just for fun"
Hearing that made your walls cave in
"i lost my virginity, and now i see why i didnt ***?"
"i lost my virginity, for your fun? for you didnt even love me, i cant believe it was just for ***.
me hearing this on the phone,
me wanting to die so my friend can live,
all i could do was just moan.
then he heard me and said
"i know your there"
"yes i am and you hurt my best friend very bad."
"i dont give a *****, bout that *****,
i dont even care if she is **** mad"
"I cheated on you the past 17 months, now ***** go cry."
"ha ha ha ha ha
you skank"
i couldnt believe i was hearing this,
feeling so bad my heart began to ache.
"you cheated on me the whole time,
i cant even believe that i thought you woudl of always been mine."
"how could you do that, and even when i wanted to die?"
your depresion really got worse,
i cant believe it,
all he ever did was curse.
"we have made and impact on each other"
"good, bad- happy, sad.
"why the hell would i even bother to remember?"
"i hate you oh so much,
you cheated on me with many girls,
then u call ME ****"
i dont get that what does he mean,
calling her a ****
when he does those gross things!
He is a *** ***,
and we all know.
when ever they were in public,
he would commet on guys, u know.
What a ****, that what he is.
yay for my friend, she id happy
"***** stay out of our biz,
its not even about you"
Finally you did it,
you finally said GO!







Copyright © dena ... [ 2004-01-22 12:57:54]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: i am finally glad (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 22nd January 2004 @ 01:04:48 PM AEST
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That poem is awesome!!! Thanks for being on the phone with me when I did it, otherwise I wouldve started crying lke a big old baby and then he wouldve just laughed. You were right all along, I shouldv'e believed you. Things will be better now that hes gone. thanks for the peom!




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