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Array ( [sid] => 32025 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Lovers Suicide [time] => 2004-01-18 13:13:24 [hometext] => [bodytext] => She knew it when she met him
from te very first time
they were meant to be together
there wasn't a doubt in her mind
from the very first words that he spoke
she could hear it in his voice
she knew he felt the same way
it was a given not by choice
immediately they were together
the couple that everyone knew
there was an intant connection
and their friends could feel it too
people said it wouldn't work
because they came from different places
but their love was everlasting
you could see it in their faces
their parents saw it differently
forbidding it to start
but their feelings were so strong
they couldn't keep them apart
their parents went through everything
thinking it couldn't last
judging by the accidents that happened in the past
it was like they'd known forever
this relationship was right
to him she was his princess and to her he was her knight
and then they were finally seperated
both of their hearts being torn
it felt like tearing the petals off a rose and being pricked by the thorn
they found a way to be together
secretly meeting at night
making love until the sun rose holding eachother tight
finally they came to realize that this was no way to live
secretly loving your soulmate was more effort than they could give
one night they went together bringing along a knife
kissing eachother goodbye
and taking eachothers life
the plunging of the knife stood for the sacrifices that they were making
and the pouring of the blood was for the measures they were taking
they held eachother tightly as they watched eachother die
but they knew it was better than living in a lie
hours later they were found noone knowing
just why they died
but stories are going around of a lovers suicide [comments] => 4 [counter] => 276 [topic] => 39 [informant] => sweetpeall [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )
Lovers Suicide

Contributed by sweetpeall on Sunday, 18th January 2004 @ 01:13:24 PM in AEST
Topic: Grief



She knew it when she met him
from te very first time
they were meant to be together
there wasn't a doubt in her mind
from the very first words that he spoke
she could hear it in his voice
she knew he felt the same way
it was a given not by choice
immediately they were together
the couple that everyone knew
there was an intant connection
and their friends could feel it too
people said it wouldn't work
because they came from different places
but their love was everlasting
you could see it in their faces
their parents saw it differently
forbidding it to start
but their feelings were so strong
they couldn't keep them apart
their parents went through everything
thinking it couldn't last
judging by the accidents that happened in the past
it was like they'd known forever
this relationship was right
to him she was his princess and to her he was her knight
and then they were finally seperated
both of their hearts being torn
it felt like tearing the petals off a rose and being pricked by the thorn
they found a way to be together
secretly meeting at night
making love until the sun rose holding eachother tight
finally they came to realize that this was no way to live
secretly loving your soulmate was more effort than they could give
one night they went together bringing along a knife
kissing eachother goodbye
and taking eachothers life
the plunging of the knife stood for the sacrifices that they were making
and the pouring of the blood was for the measures they were taking
they held eachother tightly as they watched eachother die
but they knew it was better than living in a lie
hours later they were found noone knowing
just why they died
but stories are going around of a lovers suicide




Copyright © sweetpeall ... [ 2004-01-18 13:13:24]
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Re: Lovers Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by Chadene_Gillespie on Sunday, 18th January 2004 @ 03:19:16 PM AEST
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awesome, this poem is truly capitaving. good job.


Re: Lovers Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by positivelypurple on Sunday, 18th January 2004 @ 06:27:01 PM AEST
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Romeo and Juliet I presume? Excellent work!


Re: Lovers Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by Wrybod on Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 03:39:05 AM AEST
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Well I must say you write great poetry and that is what this site is all about. The nearest I have ever got to your pathos and skill is in one poem I wrote last year called "The way we were" (Still on my list and secretly my own particular favourite)

But it falls well short of your finale

You paint a dramatic picture exceptionally well.

bob


Re: Lovers Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by StarBeneathTheStairs on Thursday, 22nd January 2004 @ 10:14:38 PM AEST
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Brilliant!
I really love this one....so tragic but so beautiful...




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