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Plastic smiles desinigrate into the truth
Souls remain untended and forsaken
Waylay thyself and die
The bottomless chasm that lies within is filled with empty tears
No longer do you feel hollow
Gazes of love all interwine and transform into deciet
You have fallen
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Delicate Display

Contributed by SkYYBLu on Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 06:47:33 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Hearts are on display
Plastic smiles desinigrate into the truth
Souls remain untended and forsaken
Waylay thyself and die
The bottomless chasm that lies within is filled with empty tears
No longer do you feel hollow
Gazes of love all interwine and transform into deciet
You have fallen
No one can help you get back upon your feet

Copyright © SkYYBLu ... [ 2004-01-12 18:47:33]
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Re: Delicate Display (User Rating: 1 )
by Necromant on Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 06:56:05 PM AEST
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My my really dark one! I agree with most of it. The wording is really strong as the imagery used. Great writing keep it up!

Anne

Re: Delicate Display (User Rating: 1 )
by afraid_of_fear on Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 09:53:52 AM AEST
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Incredible use of words, and a beautifully dark poem.. you are one talented writer..
charlotte x_x_x

Re: Delicate Display (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Thursday, 22nd January 2004 @ 05:54:28 PM AEST
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Good write. I understand this pretty well I think. Very good use of words.

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