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Resurrecting from the grave every night, was once my greatest delight,
Now after centuries of endless life, for my destruction I strive,
Eating,
Feeling,
Breathing,
Things that you do, that make me envious for you

The hunger for your blood is my only source of desire,
And trough your throat it pours in form of liquid fire,
I give you a gentle caress and, as I drink your life I possess,
And when in my arms you die, everyone will hear my cry

Help me I’m begging on my knees, give my soul some release,
For I can’t continue hating, for you I’ll be waiting,
To bring an end to my eternal existence, I will not oppose any resistance

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The vampire's cry

Contributed by Necromant on Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 11:01:51 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Resurrecting from the grave every night, was once my greatest delight,
Now after centuries of endless life, for my destruction I strive,
Eating,
Feeling,
Breathing,
Things that you do, that make me envious for you

The hunger for your blood is my only source of desire,
And trough your throat it pours in form of liquid fire,
I give you a gentle caress and, as I drink your life I possess,
And when in my arms you die, everyone will hear my cry

Help me I’m begging on my knees, give my soul some release,
For I can’t continue hating, for you I’ll be waiting,
To bring an end to my eternal existence, I will not oppose any resistance

Copyright Â© Necromant ... [ 2004-01-10 11:01:51]
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Re: The vampire's cry (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 11:43:17 AM AEST
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showed the agony of the existance well written
shari

Re: The vampire's cry (User Rating: 1 )
by alecfernadez on Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 12:43:43 PM AEST
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wow, its like you can get inside the head and mindstate of any character, and then write as if it is you that is a vampire. Thats an excellent skill, keep up the great work

Re: The vampire's cry (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 12:52:02 PM AEST
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well done, love it, hugs n' love nessa

Re: The vampire's cry (User Rating: 1 )
by Empty_Soul on Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 07:15:09 PM AEST
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AMAZING! really great write once again, loving this poem sooo much, it ties in with mine really well to! think i'll check out your werewolf on next! well done once again.
ES

Re: The vampire's cry (User Rating: 1 )
by Vitreous_Soul on Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 06:56:23 AM AEST
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Hmmm...I love vampires...I love well written dark poetry...I love vivid imagery...So, I love this!

Truly,
-V.S.

Re: The vampire's cry (User Rating: 1 )
by jeanie on Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 05:07:43 PM AEST
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Pretty good again! :D I like all this vamp and werewolf stuff and you put it in way that fits, just go on, I can't wait for another one :D:D

jeanie

Re: The vampire's cry (User Rating: 1 )
by afraid_of_fear on Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 04:11:44 PM AEST
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wow.. what a powerful image you have displayed..
charlotte x_x_x

Re: The vampire's cry (User Rating: 1 )
by Avis_Nigra on Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 10:22:50 AM AEST
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*bows in respect and flashes his fangs in a smile*

Re: The vampire's cry (User Rating: 1 )
by Hurretje on Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 01:47:28 PM AEST
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O, wonderful. I love vampires!
Keep it going on!
*sighs*
Hur

Re: The vampire's cry (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 09:11:54 PM AEST
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WOW i love vampires and this was just awesome! im speechless. just so well written and great. i love this. keep it up.
Arden

Re: The vampire's cry (User Rating: 1 )
by Queen_Dolly on Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 11:19:45 AM AEST
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Simply beautiful =)
Very powerful and emotive, much like the works of Anne Rice.
Thanks for sharing.

Queen_Dolly

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