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Array ( [sid] => 31260 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Writing on the Walls Again [time] => 2004-01-10 10:45:51 [hometext] => This is just something that came out of my head, its kinda like a parody off all the people who act like nuts to be cool, but it has my own feelings in it, its like a random freestyle write. [bodytext] => Show me you skin,
Show me your blood,
Show me you sin,
Show me your heart

I dont know anymore,
I cant See anymore
Where am I
Get away you *****

Writing on the walls again,
With my blood, feel the pain,
Writing on the walls again,
Keeping myself insane

Everybodies crazy,
I'm not mad,
I'm just lazy,

Eating at me all the time,
Why the ***** am I writing this rhyme,
Tell me god who the hell am I,
Tell me why you live in the sky,
Tell me who I am

Can you see Me now,
Can you see Me now,
Can you see Me now,

Walking blindly in the light,
Jesus the lights are the bright,
Lucifer can I borrow a light,
Light this ciggy tonight

Who the ***** am I
Who the ***** am I
Who the ***** am I
Where did I leave me pizza

Here we go again,
Thousand miles away,
Reliving pain, more and more rage
Cant go or stay,
Trapped in this bamboo cage

I wanna slit your goat
I wanna build a moat
I wanna kill the pope
I wanna smoke some dope
I'm so ***** cool
I act like a fool

Sit down relax and take your ***** prozac
Sit down relax and take your ***** prozac
You think you have problems but you dont
You want to kill me, but you wont
Your just another *****
So Sit down relax and take your ***** prozac

George Bush heres your anthrax
Please return to sender
George Bush I didnt ask
Stick this parcel up your ***

Where did all the money go,
Where did all the honey go,
Who ate all my sheep,
Who went to sleep
Where Is my durex hat

I dont have any homes
I dont make any sense
I wanna build a fence
Keep all my dreams at bay
Keep all my feelings away
I dont have any homes
I dont care anymore
Laugh point; Call me a *****
Dont care, just leave me now
Because
I'm death to the world beyond my headphones
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 188 [topic] => 13 [informant] => alecfernadez [notes] => .......Edited by mod_6 for language.....10-01-04 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 6 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
Writing on the Walls Again

Contributed by alecfernadez on Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 10:45:51 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



Show me you skin,
Show me your blood,
Show me you sin,
Show me your heart

I dont know anymore,
I cant See anymore
Where am I
Get away you *****

Writing on the walls again,
With my blood, feel the pain,
Writing on the walls again,
Keeping myself insane

Everybodies crazy,
I'm not mad,
I'm just lazy,

Eating at me all the time,
Why the ***** am I writing this rhyme,
Tell me god who the hell am I,
Tell me why you live in the sky,
Tell me who I am

Can you see Me now,
Can you see Me now,
Can you see Me now,

Walking blindly in the light,
Jesus the lights are the bright,
Lucifer can I borrow a light,
Light this ciggy tonight

Who the ***** am I
Who the ***** am I
Who the ***** am I
Where did I leave me pizza

Here we go again,
Thousand miles away,
Reliving pain, more and more rage
Cant go or stay,
Trapped in this bamboo cage

I wanna slit your goat
I wanna build a moat
I wanna kill the pope
I wanna smoke some dope
I'm so ***** cool
I act like a fool

Sit down relax and take your ***** prozac
Sit down relax and take your ***** prozac
You think you have problems but you dont
You want to kill me, but you wont
Your just another *****
So Sit down relax and take your ***** prozac

George Bush heres your anthrax
Please return to sender
George Bush I didnt ask
Stick this parcel up your ***

Where did all the money go,
Where did all the honey go,
Who ate all my sheep,
Who went to sleep
Where Is my durex hat

I dont have any homes
I dont make any sense
I wanna build a fence
Keep all my dreams at bay
Keep all my feelings away
I dont have any homes
I dont care anymore
Laugh point; Call me a *****
Dont care, just leave me now
Because
I'm death to the world beyond my headphones




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Re: Writing on the Walls Again (User Rating: 1 )
by Necromant on Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 11:13:19 AM AEST
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I'm speechless........... ... .. . This is one of your best poems! I loved it! All the rage shows through your words! The style is great, and most of the words you said I felt them really close. Amazing writing! Fav part was:
'George Bush heres your anthrax
Please return to sender
George Bush I didnt ask
Stick this parcel up your ass'
It make me laugh! I agree with you! Amazing skill Keep it up!

Anne


Re: Writing on the Walls Again (User Rating: 1 )
by MissTea on Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 01:45:52 PM AEST
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as said above probably one of ur best!
I read the pain, the reality, the truthfullness, the hate; in all but one poem.

very good

MissTea


Re: Writing on the Walls Again (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Thursday, 15th January 2004 @ 10:58:25 AM AEST
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..... Dude.... I just wanted you to know.... That was ***** awesome.




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