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Array ( [sid] => 30945 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Cịrann's Song [time] => 2004-01-07 00:22:21 [hometext] => Cịrann's lament for Tasael his love, whose people fled because of war [bodytext] => The stars are bright
Above my head
They make me to think
Of the eyes of a girl
Of a tender-smiling one
One I once knew
And will remember

She was a bright lass
As I do remember
Her hair was red
Like leaves in the fall
It fell on her shoulders
Like a rippling stream
It was soft, as I remember

Bright were the days
When she was near
It was always warm
And the birds sang sweetly
Stars shone in the day
In her eyes
My heart was glad

But she is gone
Taken away from me
It is cold; winter
Fire may not warm me
Nor may my cloak
Only her embrace could
Alas! my heart is cold
[comments] => 7 [counter] => 219 [topic] => 22 [informant] => fionndruinne [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 39 [ratings] => 8 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
Cịrann's Song

Contributed by fionndruinne on Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 12:22:21 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



The stars are bright
Above my head
They make me to think
Of the eyes of a girl
Of a tender-smiling one
One I once knew
And will remember

She was a bright lass
As I do remember
Her hair was red
Like leaves in the fall
It fell on her shoulders
Like a rippling stream
It was soft, as I remember

Bright were the days
When she was near
It was always warm
And the birds sang sweetly
Stars shone in the day
In her eyes
My heart was glad

But she is gone
Taken away from me
It is cold; winter
Fire may not warm me
Nor may my cloak
Only her embrace could
Alas! my heart is cold




Copyright © fionndruinne ... [ 2004-01-07 00:22:21]
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Re: Cịrann's Song (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 12:30:43 AM AEST
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This is so beautifull even tho sad.
She's a very lucky lady.
Ooooooowwwww
higgs, luv,
emy


Re: Cịrann's Song (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 12:31:02 AM AEST
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This is so beautifull even tho sad.
She's a very lucky lady.
Ooooooowwwww
huggs, luv,
emy


Re: Cịrann's Song (User Rating: 1 )
by faith_my_eyes on Thursday, 8th January 2004 @ 12:30:05 AM AEST
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Poor Ciorann! Now how does Tasael feel about her lost love?


Re: Cịrann's Song (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 07:11:38 PM AEST
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Sad and sweet portrayal of a memory.
Stitch


Re: Cịrann's Song (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 01:53:24 AM AEST
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A beautiful lament, i imagined when i was reading this that it was a part of a great play. Sounded brilliant on my imaginary stage!

wildejohnny.


Re: Cịrann's Song (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 10:10:59 PM AEST
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this is so beautiful... I was thinking along the same lines as wildejohnny it would make a good sillouquet for a play.


Re: Cịrann's Song (User Rating: 1 )
by liquidsunshine on Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 02:33:37 PM AEST
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Awesome!!! It's SO good! Especially after reading that "novel" of a poem. ;-)
Love,
Chelsea




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