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Array ( [sid] => 30683 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Failure [time] => 2004-01-03 17:00:25 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I always have my best at heart
I always fail and fall apart
My heart deals with self-pity and sadness
My mind deals with insanity complete madness
I try so hard for that "perfect life"
Somehow always left standing alone and loosing this fight
So bad I want to cut out this pain
In hopes of a few moments of feeling no blame
So many ones I love I have failed
So many times my train of life has de-railed
Why can't I grasp reality
Why does failure follow me
A black cloud above my head
Too many thing left undone, unsaid
Too many mistakes lead me to darkness
Leaving me once again alone, battered, beaten and broken-hearted [comments] => 6 [counter] => 190 [topic] => 48 [informant] => lovesucks [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Failure

Contributed by lovesucks on Saturday, 3rd January 2004 @ 05:00:25 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I always have my best at heart
I always fail and fall apart
My heart deals with self-pity and sadness
My mind deals with insanity complete madness
I try so hard for that "perfect life"
Somehow always left standing alone and loosing this fight
So bad I want to cut out this pain
In hopes of a few moments of feeling no blame
So many ones I love I have failed
So many times my train of life has de-railed
Why can't I grasp reality
Why does failure follow me
A black cloud above my head
Too many thing left undone, unsaid
Too many mistakes lead me to darkness
Leaving me once again alone, battered, beaten and broken-hearted

Copyright © lovesucks ... [ 2004-01-03 17:00:25]
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Re: Failure (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Saturday, 3rd January 2004 @ 05:07:32 PM AEST
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Hey..this is an awesome piece..but don't give up...ever!! You only become a failure when you give up....
Jenni

Re: Failure (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Saturday, 3rd January 2004 @ 07:15:51 PM AEST
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You have talent and your words are smoothly written. We all fail and most of us do it quite a bit. It is no fun but its a part of life. In your poem you expressed that so well. I hope you find strength in your own words they were soul touching.

Kie

Re: Failure (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on Saturday, 3rd January 2004 @ 07:21:23 PM AEST
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I feel your pain. Trust me on that one. I feel exactly the same way. Great write.

~ Moonlit

Re: Failure (User Rating: 1 )
by Dawny on Saturday, 3rd January 2004 @ 09:25:36 PM AEST
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Wow, you can really feel the pain. This is really well written, well done....Dawny

Re: Failure (User Rating: 1 )
by BrandySwanson on Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 08:41:58 PM AEST
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i feel your every pain i can relate to this very well. i feel the same way at times.

Brandy

Re: Failure (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 03:00:06 PM AEST
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After reading you poem, which I thought was excellent, please allow an old lady friend to tell you why you feel you fail!
Whatever you tell your mind you are going to do..........that's exactly what you do. If you think you have a black cloud hovering above you......then nothing will be sunshine....but if you tell yourself, without judging, and being so hard on You...that no matter how this turns out, I've done my very level best, then that's exactly what you do, and then You will be satisfied with You!
You must stop being so hard on you!!!
I think you are doing great!!!Keep up the good work!
Love and hugs
consue

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