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Array ( [sid] => 30219 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => No Title [time] => 2003-12-27 03:35:25 [hometext] => A critique on men, namely those who advocate prostitution. [bodytext] => Si buta, dengan tamak halobanya
Kau tak berhati perut langsung:
Kau cuma lebih suka
Menjamah selera tubuh badanmu
Untukmu, erti cinta itulah berasmara,
Erti kasih sayang itu tumbang
Diganti keghairahan hati...
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Dari tampaknya akulah satu-satunya
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Godaan nafsumu! [comments] => 2 [counter] => 198 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Qohinoor [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

No Title

Contributed by Qohinoor on Saturday, 27th December 2003 @ 03:35:25 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

Si buta, dengan tamak halobanya
Kau tak berhati perut langsung:
Kau cuma lebih suka
Menjamah selera tubuh badanmu
Untukmu, erti cinta itulah berasmara,
Erti kasih sayang itu tumbang
Diganti keghairahan hati...
Otak dan minda kegelapan,
Ditakluk nalurimu, terjerumus dalam maksiat,
Dari tampaknya akulah satu-satunya
Buah hatimu-yang sentiasa riang,
Lagi jelita dan disanjungi
Orang yang menyelak album gambar
Yang tersedia di ruang tetamu

Sebenarnya
Kamu tak pernah mengambil berat
Apa jua yang diterima kami
Yang dikerah melayanmu
Dengan tubuh sendiri
Kamu tak pernah menghormati aku
Mahupun hak-hak umatku:

Yang kamu cuma tahu sekarang
Adalah macam mana memenuhi
Kehendak dan keinginan sendiri,
Yang insannya diganti kebuasan binatang.
Engkau cuma tahu menyerah
Kepada nafsumu yang tiada batasannya
Sambil mencemari dirimu,
Kaunodai tubuh badanku
Dengan kesengsaraan
Engkau lebih menyukai wajahku.
Sebagai satu lagi wakil impianmu
Yang paling jijik dan tercemar
Godaan nafsumu!

Copyright © Qohinoor ... [ 2003-12-27 03:35:25]
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Re: No Title (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Saturday, 27th December 2003 @ 04:14:32 AM AEST
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greetings my friend!
wish you a happy and
prosperous new year!
venkat

Re: No Title (User Rating: 1 )
by Menelaus on Saturday, 27th December 2003 @ 04:43:17 AM AEST
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Great work,. for our time.
I should like to see this out on the streets, where everyone can read it and then think whether they're doing things the right way.

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