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Array ( [sid] => 30174 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Y R We Different? [time] => 2003-12-26 01:56:04 [hometext] => [bodytext] => sum people laf
sum people cry
we all r different
i still dont kno y

sumtimez i wish
we were all just the same
that we would all look alike
and all have the same name

ill find myself thinking
"i wish i were her"
and then make-believing
my wish had come true

it really is stupid
its really not fun
2 compare urself 2 sum1
whos smart wen ur dumb

i still just dont get it
i still makez no sense
is my need 4self-esteem
really quite that imense?

life throws u problemz
that u dont kno how 2 solve
but sooner or later
ur thinking'll evolve

ull realise ur rong
that we're all better off
looking quite different
than some1 else not far off

i kno it soundz crazy
that im really quite rong
but give it some time
and ull agree in not long [comments] => 2 [counter] => 261 [topic] => 30 [informant] => Alyssa [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => PoemsonBeauty )

Y R We Different?

Contributed by Alyssa on Friday, 26th December 2003 @ 01:56:04 AM in AEST
Topic: PoemsonBeauty

sum people laf
sum people cry
we all r different
i still dont kno y

sumtimez i wish
we were all just the same
that we would all look alike
and all have the same name

ill find myself thinking
"i wish i were her"
and then make-believing
my wish had come true

it really is stupid
its really not fun
2 compare urself 2 sum1
whos smart wen ur dumb

i still just dont get it
i still makez no sense
is my need 4self-esteem
really quite that imense?

life throws u problemz
that u dont kno how 2 solve
but sooner or later
ur thinking'll evolve

ull realise ur rong
that we're all better off
looking quite different
than some1 else not far off

i kno it soundz crazy
that im really quite rong
but give it some time
and ull agree in not long

Copyright © Alyssa ... [ 2003-12-26 01:56:04]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Y R We Different? (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Friday, 26th December 2003 @ 07:49:13 AM AEST
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This is a really good poem. The general context has alot to say and you do it well. The only thing that thru me off were the misspellings and the numbers instead of words.

Kie

Re: Y R We Different? (User Rating: 1 )
by eternityandaday4u on Sunday, 4th January 2004 @ 04:03:52 AM AEST
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i agree with kie i understood you and i also think that you are a talented poet but why were there numbers. the mispellings were many. i wondered was scared to mention but did any way. just wondering.
any way you really are a great writer and astonishing write but cut down on the numbers and mispelled words. over all i simply love this poem and greatly appreciate that you posted it for all to see.
always a star
eternityandaday4u!

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