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Array ( [sid] => 29714 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => For Love [time] => 2003-12-19 00:15:31 [hometext] => I wrote this a while ago, It was after a hard breakup with the first person I ever really loved. I hope you like it.. PLEASE comment. [bodytext] => Alone she sits in her room,
Watching the rse of the moon.
The chain on her neck she clutches tight,
For in her life, it's her only light.
Her father is cruel as he beats her,
Her mother, hard as she mistreats her.
They were in love, true to the end.
How was she to know for him God would send?
Slippery was the road they were on,
In less than a second his life was gone.
The police lights, the rain, the shock of it all,
They told her as they watched her fall.
For weeks she cried herself to sleep,
Asking how God could hurt her so deep.
Her love to heaven she did send,
But no more pain, tonight was the end.
She placed her chain on his grave,
And prayed God would pick her sould to save.
She lie down with a knife in her chest,
And fell into her eternal rest. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 252 [topic] => 22 [informant] => SadnessPrevails [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

For Love

Contributed by SadnessPrevails on Friday, 19th December 2003 @ 12:15:31 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Alone she sits in her room,
Watching the rse of the moon.
The chain on her neck she clutches tight,
For in her life, it's her only light.
Her father is cruel as he beats her,
Her mother, hard as she mistreats her.
They were in love, true to the end.
How was she to know for him God would send?
Slippery was the road they were on,
In less than a second his life was gone.
The police lights, the rain, the shock of it all,
They told her as they watched her fall.
For weeks she cried herself to sleep,
Asking how God could hurt her so deep.
Her love to heaven she did send,
But no more pain, tonight was the end.
She placed her chain on his grave,
And prayed God would pick her sould to save.
She lie down with a knife in her chest,
And fell into her eternal rest.

Copyright © SadnessPrevails ... [ 2003-12-19 00:15:31]
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Re: For Love (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 19th December 2003 @ 01:14:52 AM AEST
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Very good writing but very sad.
peace, joy, luv,
emy

Re: For Love (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Friday, 19th December 2003 @ 01:39:56 AM AEST
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this is sad.. but very touching.. great write

peace joy and hope
JENNA

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