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I let out my life with a sigh
Sick of cooping up these emotions
Wanting to take this razor
This exacto knife, this lighter
And show the world how [i] sick [/i] I really am

The smell of burning flesh
Caresses my nostrils, pain
Floods my brain
The longing to taste blood
Overwhelms my weakened defences

I think about jumping off a bridge
That's so quick, but messy,
But like a magnet
Or some subliminal message
Buzzing in my brain, I'm beckoned

I walk around town
Aimlessly, like some lost beggar
No purpose just talking to myself
Pointed and laughed at
I don't care I'm beyond feeling

I'm frozen inside, void of feeling
Put a bullet in me
Saunter away as my life ebbs
I'm sure God will give you a medal
For ending one poor man's suffering [comments] => 6 [counter] => 493 [topic] => 36 [informant] => bobotheclown [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 12 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Feelings of Suicide

Contributed by bobotheclown on Friday, 12th December 2003 @ 05:05:46 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

I let out my life with a sigh
Sick of cooping up these emotions
Wanting to take this razor
This exacto knife, this lighter
And show the world how [i] sick [/i] I really am

The smell of burning flesh
Caresses my nostrils, pain
Floods my brain
The longing to taste blood
Overwhelms my weakened defences

I think about jumping off a bridge
That's so quick, but messy,
But like a magnet
Or some subliminal message
Buzzing in my brain, I'm beckoned

I walk around town
Aimlessly, like some lost beggar
No purpose just talking to myself
Pointed and laughed at
I don't care I'm beyond feeling

I'm frozen inside, void of feeling
Put a bullet in me
Saunter away as my life ebbs
I'm sure God will give you a medal
For ending one poor man's suffering

Copyright © bobotheclown ... [ 2003-12-12 17:05:46]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Feelings of Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by norticus on Friday, 12th December 2003 @ 05:11:48 PM AEST
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I actually did like this. For some reason I seem to love peoms about other people's pain. It makes me happy. Burning flesh is a nice poutpouri isn't it?
I give this a 4.6 on the Nortiscale.
norticus

Re: Feelings of Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Friday, 12th December 2003 @ 05:12:44 PM AEST
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This was an interesting one... I can relate to some of the ideas though heh. Except I want to jump off a bridge... With a bungee cord of course.

Re: Feelings of Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by Chanti on Saturday, 13th December 2003 @ 04:51:15 PM AEST
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Awesome write Joel. I really liked this one.. I hope you dont still feel this way

Re: Feelings of Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by SensitiveSoAbused on Saturday, 13th December 2003 @ 11:30:58 PM AEST
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awesome stuff joel. at times i look at you and i see a mirror

Re: Feelings of Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by desertrose on Sunday, 14th December 2003 @ 02:57:53 AM AEST
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bobo i'm more scared of the message you said about killing us if we take colds poem lol

depression i have been down that road... glad you are ok or are you

Re: Feelings of Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by afraid_of_fear on Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 01:40:12 PM AEST
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ooh i missed this one.. but i like it, i love the pure emotions flowing out of it.. the last line is very clever, i like it..
charlotte xxx

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