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Array ( [sid] => 28704 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Bottled Up [time] => 2003-12-05 21:18:48 [hometext] => ....my whole life is bottled up.... [bodytext] => If all of my bottles are opened
I'll surely go out of my mind,
But if they're wasted on one person
his body....no one shall find.
For these bottles that I mention
are the bottled up feelings of mine,
I hope none of them are opened
so that everything will remain just fine.

Most bottles contain my anger
in which words can not describe,
If you were to test that anger
you'd feel the most disturbing vibe.

Others contain heartbreak
which left me nearly without emotion,
When I try to leave me heart open
I'm left stranded in their ocean.

I also have smaller bottles
which are more like "locks",
Because they contain my crazy side
and are sort of like "massacist's block".
Even I know that if I unlock
I'll only make attempts to kill,
But my good side
gives me enough patience to chill.

If it wasn't for my good side
I'd probably find something to blowup,
But the only problem with my bottles is:
My whole life is....Bottled Up.
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Bottled Up

Contributed by Sonibe on Friday, 5th December 2003 @ 09:18:48 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

If all of my bottles are opened
I'll surely go out of my mind,
But if they're wasted on one person
his body....no one shall find.
For these bottles that I mention
are the bottled up feelings of mine,
I hope none of them are opened
so that everything will remain just fine.

Most bottles contain my anger
in which words can not describe,
If you were to test that anger
you'd feel the most disturbing vibe.

Others contain heartbreak
which left me nearly without emotion,
When I try to leave me heart open
I'm left stranded in their ocean.

I also have smaller bottles
which are more like "locks",
Because they contain my crazy side
and are sort of like "massacist's block".
Even I know that if I unlock
I'll only make attempts to kill,
But my good side
gives me enough patience to chill.

If it wasn't for my good side
I'd probably find something to blowup,
But the only problem with my bottles is:
My whole life is....Bottled Up.

Copyright © Sonibe ... [ 2003-12-05 21:18:48]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Bottled Up (User Rating: 1 )
by EmSal on Friday, 5th December 2003 @ 11:39:12 PM AEST
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This was a good write. Nice rhyming too...got my attention and I kinda know what you're talking about too. Al the best.

Emma.

Re: Bottled Up (User Rating: 1 )
by Hanno on Sunday, 7th December 2003 @ 05:54:06 AM AEST
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This is about me I reckon!!!!!!

Re: Bottled Up (User Rating: 1 )
by Wrybod on Monday, 29th December 2003 @ 05:21:31 PM AEST
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That's the way it is for us
Or would you rather be a tree

bob

Re: Bottled Up (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 03:31:13 PM AEST
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no doubt the way you truly feel. i know that feeling because it is inside of me all the time. just keep up the good work sir sonibe.

Re: Bottled Up (User Rating: 1 )
by Brians_Sweety on Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 04:26:15 PM AEST
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Great write! I love your poetry and always will. I just hope someday you can find a person that you can share your life with because you love and trust them so much, that you won't mind to open a bottle or two.

Darlene

Re: Bottled Up (User Rating: 1 )
by Brians_Sweety on Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 01:52:15 PM AEST
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Hey sweety you shouldn't ever stay bottled up. I here so much about this bad anger side. I'm so proud of you that you don' t blow up though. You need to find someway to let your bottles contents vanish though. There are several ways and one of them is me. You know that.

Love you!!!
Darlene "Kumicho" I think lol

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