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Array ( [sid] => 28655 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Entering Death [time] => 2003-12-05 07:18:31 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Sitting there still,
Thinking about death,
Wondering if I want to,
Take another breath.

I tell you how I feel,
To die is what I dream,
The silence is shattering,
My body dead in a stream.

I start to say,
That I can no longer live,
I hate the world so,
I just hope you can forgive.

I can feel your love,
Flowing through my life,
Your friendship keeps me alive,
And keeps me out of strife.

I start thinking about,
How much easier it would be,
To end the hate and misery,
To bring death to me.

I try hard to fight,
But no longer can I stay,
As I enter my death bed,
Where eternity I will lay.
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Entering Death

Contributed by cammy on Friday, 5th December 2003 @ 07:18:31 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

Sitting there still,
Thinking about death,
Wondering if I want to,
Take another breath.

I tell you how I feel,
To die is what I dream,
The silence is shattering,
My body dead in a stream.

I start to say,
That I can no longer live,
I hate the world so,
I just hope you can forgive.

I can feel your love,
Flowing through my life,
Your friendship keeps me alive,
And keeps me out of strife.

I start thinking about,
How much easier it would be,
To end the hate and misery,
To bring death to me.

I try hard to fight,
But no longer can I stay,
As I enter my death bed,
Where eternity I will lay.

Copyright © cammy ... [ 2003-12-05 07:18:31]
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Re: Entering Death (User Rating: 1 )
by P0rNStAr on Friday, 5th December 2003 @ 08:00:05 AM AEST
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"I can feel your love,
Flowing through my life,
Your friendship keeps me alive,
And keeps me out of strife." and theres the reason we dont end it everyone goes through bad times some more then others but we try go on and for better eventually well written think alot can relate to this or atleast i

Re: Entering Death (User Rating: 1 )
by The_darkest_death on Friday, 5th December 2003 @ 05:50:59 PM AEST
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Hey good poem I often think about killing myself so I can relate to it. Good poem keep it up.

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