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Array ( [sid] => 28229 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => STUPID STUPID SUICIDE [time] => 2003-11-29 16:29:56 [hometext] => [bodytext] => ONE , TWO , THREE , BANG
THEIR GO'S YOUR LIFE AND YOU HAD A SAY
(STUPID SUICIDE)

IN THE NEXT STATE OVER
ONE , TWO , THREE CLANG
THE CHAIR FALLS OVER
AND HE CAN FEAL HIS VAINS
FREEZE OVER
(STUPID SUCIDE)

ONE , TWO , THREE , HERE WE GO
ONE PILL , TWO PILL ,THREE , PILL FOUR
YOU JUST COLLAPSE ON THE BEDROOM FLOOR
(STUPID SUICIDE)

ONE , TWO , THREE
JUST BREATH
YOU CAN DO IT
COMEON YOUR UP TO IT
WHAT WHAT AM I DOING??
THIS IS RELLY STUPID , JUST BECAUSE LIFE GETS CONFUSEING
DOSENT MEAN YOU HAVE TO GIVE UP
IF YOU DO SUCIDE YOU WHONT GO TO THE PLACE ABOVE

I HAVE LOST FREINDS AND MISS THEM EVERY DAY
BECAUSE STUPID SUICIDE THATS ALL I HAVE TO SAY
STUPID SUCIDE TRUST ME ITS NOT THE WAY
BY KILLING YOURSELF THEIR GO'S YOUR FAMILY AND FREINDS TO
TRUST ME SUCIDE IS NOT THE ONE TO CHOSE

JUST LIKE TAKEING DRUGS JUST YOU CANT GO BACK
ONCE YOU START , YOUR LIFE IS FINISHED AND THATS A FACT
BUT PLESE HOLD BACK DONT CHOSE STUPID SUCIDE
BUT PLESE DONT HOLD IT IN DONT TAKE YOU LIFE

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STUPID STUPID SUICIDE

Contributed by jkpunk13 on Saturday, 29th November 2003 @ 04:29:56 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

ONE , TWO , THREE , BANG
THEIR GO'S YOUR LIFE AND YOU HAD A SAY
(STUPID SUICIDE)

IN THE NEXT STATE OVER
ONE , TWO , THREE CLANG
THE CHAIR FALLS OVER
AND HE CAN FEAL HIS VAINS
FREEZE OVER
(STUPID SUCIDE)

ONE , TWO , THREE , HERE WE GO
ONE PILL , TWO PILL ,THREE , PILL FOUR
YOU JUST COLLAPSE ON THE BEDROOM FLOOR
(STUPID SUICIDE)

ONE , TWO , THREE
JUST BREATH
YOU CAN DO IT
COMEON YOUR UP TO IT
WHAT WHAT AM I DOING??
THIS IS RELLY STUPID , JUST BECAUSE LIFE GETS CONFUSEING
DOSENT MEAN YOU HAVE TO GIVE UP
IF YOU DO SUCIDE YOU WHONT GO TO THE PLACE ABOVE

I HAVE LOST FREINDS AND MISS THEM EVERY DAY
BECAUSE STUPID SUICIDE THATS ALL I HAVE TO SAY
STUPID SUCIDE TRUST ME ITS NOT THE WAY
BY KILLING YOURSELF THEIR GO'S YOUR FAMILY AND FREINDS TO
TRUST ME SUCIDE IS NOT THE ONE TO CHOSE

JUST LIKE TAKEING DRUGS JUST YOU CANT GO BACK
ONCE YOU START , YOUR LIFE IS FINISHED AND THATS A FACT
BUT PLESE HOLD BACK DONT CHOSE STUPID SUCIDE
BUT PLESE DONT HOLD IT IN DONT TAKE YOU LIFE

Copyright © jkpunk13 ... [ 2003-11-29 16:29:56]
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Re: STUPID STUPID SUICIDE (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 29th November 2003 @ 08:02:18 PM AEST
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I agree with you, but your poem needs a complete spell check. Lots of typos and spelling mistakes.
Peace

Re: STUPID STUPID SUICIDE (User Rating: 1 )
by EmSal on Saturday, 29th November 2003 @ 10:53:01 PM AEST
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Pretty good write...written in capitals probably to give it the shouting effect...which it did. I have also lost people to suicide, and had people damage themselfs by trying to commit it. Definately a reality check to those who are concidering it...your poem gives. Take care.

Emma.

Re: STUPID STUPID SUICIDE (User Rating: 1 )
by sugar0986 on Monday, 1st December 2003 @ 09:12:38 PM AEST
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good poem, I really like this one a lot.

~Brittany~

Re: STUPID STUPID SUICIDE (User Rating: 1 )
by TaintedOptomist on Saturday, 6th December 2003 @ 11:56:04 AM AEST
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good write, though most of my poetry (if yuo'd cakll it that) is about suicide. i like to look at it as a safety net. but i have had my attempts so it's a big part of my life i grew up with sucide.

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