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Array ( [sid] => 28168 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => ~Still~ [time] => 2003-11-28 21:11:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] =>
Why I'm here I do not know,
they say i must go on...

at the moment its not worth it,
i feel scraped and torn

they tell me that its just a phase
in a month it will be gone

but for the last six years ive felt
that i shouldn't have been born

this feeling now is normal
-- it is nothing new to me

it is not the bad that comes and goes
but the good that always ends

depression is my way of life
there is nothing else i see

and now its where i put my trust,
not in god, nor word, nor friends

and now i sit here staring,
i hate even what i write

its just more negativity,
my artistic urge infected

this feeling seizes everything
the end is not in sight

i squint and peer through bloody eyes;
still happiness rejected. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 145 [topic] => 48 [informant] => SensitiveSoAbused [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

~Still~

Contributed by SensitiveSoAbused on Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 09:11:00 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Why I'm here I do not know,
they say i must go on...

at the moment its not worth it,
i feel scraped and torn

they tell me that its just a phase
in a month it will be gone

but for the last six years ive felt
that i shouldn't have been born

this feeling now is normal
-- it is nothing new to me

it is not the bad that comes and goes
but the good that always ends

depression is my way of life
there is nothing else i see

and now its where i put my trust,
not in god, nor word, nor friends

and now i sit here staring,
i hate even what i write

its just more negativity,
my artistic urge infected

this feeling seizes everything
the end is not in sight

i squint and peer through bloody eyes;
still happiness rejected.

Copyright © SensitiveSoAbused ... [ 2003-11-28 21:11:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: ~Still~ (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 09:28:26 PM AEST
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This is so very sad.
You expressed your feelings well in this write and never give up nor give up with your writing.Writing is a good release, sounds like you need to come and have a hot buttered rum with me it will cheer you up! Being serious I can relate to these feelings and how your feeling. Keep on trying

Re: ~Still~ (User Rating: 1 )
by EmSal on Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 10:45:16 PM AEST
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Definately not a good thing to just keep going thorugh, to see no end to it. But hopefully what the others have been telling you that it will end soon, and I hope that it will...takes time for everyone. Good write though. All the best.

Emma.

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