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Everyday emotions collide.
I need some help, I need some pills.
Even if it's me they kill.
Its either pills or a knife.
One of them will end my unhappy life.
A knife would hurt but I like the pain.
All I would have to do is slice a vein.
The blood would be dripping while I was dying.
And on the inside I would still be crying.
A cry for help from anyone.
But its to late, my life is done.
Now in a pool of my own blood I lay.
As if waiting for the next day.
When someone would see me laying there.
And then maybe someone will finally care. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 408 [topic] => 6 [informant] => Breezer08 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 25 [ratings] => 6 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

Hurting

Contributed by Breezer08 on Thursday, 27th November 2003 @ 03:13:10 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

Why is there so much pain inside?
Everyday emotions collide.
I need some help, I need some pills.
Even if it's me they kill.
Its either pills or a knife.
One of them will end my unhappy life.
A knife would hurt but I like the pain.
All I would have to do is slice a vein.
The blood would be dripping while I was dying.
And on the inside I would still be crying.
A cry for help from anyone.
But its to late, my life is done.
Now in a pool of my own blood I lay.
As if waiting for the next day.
When someone would see me laying there.
And then maybe someone will finally care.

Copyright © Breezer08 ... [ 2003-11-27 03:13:10]
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Re: Hurting (User Rating: 1 )
by EmSal on Thursday, 27th November 2003 @ 06:30:09 AM AEST
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Yes I feel the same...good write even though you don't remember writing it. Take care.

Emma.

Re: Hurting (User Rating: 1 )
by M on Thursday, 27th November 2003 @ 11:55:18 AM AEST
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Well, all i can say is that you must have written a hell of a lot of amazing poems if you can't remember writing this one. It really is brilliant! Such a sad one too. I hope you have moved on from these feelings, and remember that someone does care for you.
EmilyxXx

Re: Hurting (User Rating: 1 )
by loopylou on Thursday, 27th November 2003 @ 03:20:31 PM AEST
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your poems so real it stings.....im glad you dont feel like this.....good use of emotion

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