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Array ( [sid] => 27656 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A Place [time] => 2003-11-22 15:03:04 [hometext] => This poem is about me not wanting to live in this world or so called life and wanting to live within my dreams. [bodytext] => I wish there was a place I could just go
a place where I could hide from everything
when things go wrong
when thing get hard to even think about it all

I wish there was a place where I could go and forget it all
a place where all my dreams come true
where all my falures never existed
a place where no one could find me
a place where no one could hear my crying
or even my screaming

I wish there was a place where my light could be found
a place where it could shine so brightly
where I could smile so grand
where I could be happy again
a place where my life could have some meaning
a place where I am always wanted

I wish there was a place where no one would judge me
a place where no one would put me down,
just because of the way I look or act
a place where they will accept me for me
where there are people like me
where I could say something and be understood

I wish there was a place
just a place where I could go
a place to get away from "you"-
"you people" who judge me so
a place where I could just lay my head down and die
a place so peaceful and quiet,
no more screaming in that place of mine
that place would be my tomb
oh how I wish there was a place like that. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 213 [topic] => 14 [informant] => Ewin [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DreamsandWishes )

A Place

Contributed by Ewin on Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 03:03:04 PM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes

I wish there was a place I could just go
a place where I could hide from everything
when things go wrong
when thing get hard to even think about it all

I wish there was a place where I could go and forget it all
a place where all my dreams come true
where all my falures never existed
a place where no one could find me
a place where no one could hear my crying
or even my screaming

I wish there was a place where my light could be found
a place where it could shine so brightly
where I could smile so grand
where I could be happy again
a place where my life could have some meaning
a place where I am always wanted

I wish there was a place where no one would judge me
a place where no one would put me down,
just because of the way I look or act
a place where they will accept me for me
where there are people like me
where I could say something and be understood

I wish there was a place
just a place where I could go
a place to get away from "you"-
"you people" who judge me so
a place where I could just lay my head down and die
a place so peaceful and quiet,
no more screaming in that place of mine
that place would be my tomb
oh how I wish there was a place like that.

Copyright © Ewin ... [ 2003-11-22 15:03:04]
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Re: A Place (User Rating: 1 )
by Exodus-On-Life on Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 03:09:55 PM AEST
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Great write.

I also understand the want for somewhere else to go.

5

-Ex

Re: A Place (User Rating: 1 )
by Aika on Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 03:25:18 PM AEST
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Great writing! I loved a lot!!
it is just problem of this world, acceptance of easy rule : Live and let live would save this world. I wish you found this place, just small, but inside of yourself, a wonderful place where you can be happy or cry, if you need or want. I created my own inside world, if I need, I go there. My inside paradise. Wish you were happy! aika:-)

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