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Array ( [sid] => 27491 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Blessed beat [time] => 2003-11-20 00:17:41 [hometext] => Kinda just two people... Heh. [bodytext] => Feel the beat
live the sound.
Feeling it deep
letting it take over.
Next to you
beside and inside.
Blushing crimson red
touching and feeling.
Feeling your body
and how you're moving.
Flush can't get enough.
Hips together meeting
even eyes locked
tight together.
Having you in
both our minds.
Dancing close in
perfect rhythm......

The book of the faulty phoenix [comments] => 6 [counter] => 172 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Cobalt [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 1 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Blessed beat

Contributed by Cobalt on Thursday, 20th November 2003 @ 12:17:41 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

Feel the beat
live the sound.
Feeling it deep
letting it take over.
Next to you
beside and inside.
Blushing crimson red
touching and feeling.
Feeling your body
and how you're moving.
Flush can't get enough.
Hips together meeting
even eyes locked
tight together.
Having you in
both our minds.
Dancing close in
perfect rhythm......

The book of the faulty phoenix

Copyright © Cobalt ... [ 2003-11-20 00:17:41]
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Re: Blessed beat (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Thursday, 20th November 2003 @ 12:19:53 AM AEST
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ooo, love it... nice image here. :)

Re: Blessed beat (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 20th November 2003 @ 04:54:13 AM AEST
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Sounds heavenly!
peace, joy, luv,
emy

Re: Blessed beat (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Thursday, 20th November 2003 @ 06:29:05 AM AEST
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Lovely imagery... Enjoyed this... The first 4 lines made me think of our Carnival here...with the steel pans playing..the sound of which somehow takes over a person's head...lol...
Jenni

Re: Blessed beat (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Friday, 21st November 2003 @ 02:27:04 AM AEST
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Oh, lovely.. venkat

Re: Blessed beat (User Rating: 1 )
by poetrygodslove on Wednesday, 3rd December 2003 @ 10:21:54 PM AEST
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nice feelings.......wow......come on now dont stop here ...want to read some more..hehehe...meow.....sandy

Re: Blessed beat (User Rating: 1 )
by sweetangeluk on Thursday, 11th December 2003 @ 04:59:32 PM AEST
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Cor was just getting right into that.........
It ended to soon lol

Brilliant is there a part two

Love
Angelxxx

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