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Array ( [sid] => 2728 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Girl In The Mirror [time] => 2002-08-24 18:09:45 [hometext] => "Another me...
It could never be" [bodytext] => I often wonder,
Sitting at my desk,
If there's another me.
Staring back at me.
From the loooking glass.

Another me...
Wouldn't that be something?

I wonder if she's got long hair,
Bright as the sun.
I wonder if she's got eyes,
Blue as the sky.
I wonder if she's as happy as she looks.

Another me...
Wouldn't that be nice.

I wonder if she's got money,
Enough to fill a pool.
I wonder if she's got jewel's,
Like the desert has sand.
I wonder if it can protect her like she thinks.

Another me...
Wouldn't that be odd.

I wonder if she's got family,
Complete with a good name.
I wonder if she's got friends,
That attend every single party.
I wonder if they ever notice when she cries.

Another me...
Wouldn't that be wrong.

I wonder if she's got cuts,
Which cover her arms with scars.
I wonder if she's got bars,
That keep her locked in forever.

Another me...
Would still be me. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 215 [topic] => 14 [informant] => Eternal_Darkness [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DreamsandWishes )
The Girl In The Mirror

Contributed by Eternal_Darkness on Saturday, 24th August 2002 @ 06:09:45 PM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes



I often wonder,
Sitting at my desk,
If there's another me.
Staring back at me.
From the loooking glass.

Another me...
Wouldn't that be something?

I wonder if she's got long hair,
Bright as the sun.
I wonder if she's got eyes,
Blue as the sky.
I wonder if she's as happy as she looks.

Another me...
Wouldn't that be nice.

I wonder if she's got money,
Enough to fill a pool.
I wonder if she's got jewel's,
Like the desert has sand.
I wonder if it can protect her like she thinks.

Another me...
Wouldn't that be odd.

I wonder if she's got family,
Complete with a good name.
I wonder if she's got friends,
That attend every single party.
I wonder if they ever notice when she cries.

Another me...
Wouldn't that be wrong.

I wonder if she's got cuts,
Which cover her arms with scars.
I wonder if she's got bars,
That keep her locked in forever.

Another me...
Would still be me.




Copyright © Eternal_Darkness ... [ 2002-08-24 18:09:45]
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Re: The Girl In The Mirror (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on Saturday, 24th August 2002 @ 07:04:24 PM AEST
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Oh wow...this is amazing...but so sad! Just goes to show, not everything is as it appears to be. We should always look deeper than the surface. I hope someone does. This is the best poem I've read in a while. I had to read it twice! Amazing work!
~ Moonlit


Re: The Girl In The Mirror (User Rating: 1 )
by chatabox on Sunday, 25th August 2002 @ 03:35:20 AM AEST
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ah, but would this person be so talented and beautiful as you...I doubt it.

lovely lovely poem
Penny.





Re: The Girl In The Mirror (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 08:34:20 AM AEST
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Nice!

I've oft stared into the mirror and thought things like (but not exactly like) this . . .

You have a ponderous mind. Keep it that way . . .




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