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it takes over me
it spreads through
my entire body
my legs are numb and raw from
scratching

MY breath be held
from this horrible itcy attacking
perhaps it's itch cream I am lacking

The disease
it takes over me
my eyes are blood shot and bloody raw
So i can no longer see
my hands sore from all the scratching
that they are in pain

the only thing left
is a blind way ward hope
with this eternal itching
I can not cope
My hope is unsure
my itching is too mcuh and i
can't move on

I lay down upon the snow and over me
I let wind blow
the sun rises and I can feel the glow

The disease

It takes over me
even my feet no longer walk
and my mouth can no longer talk
So i lay to die
so this is my only good bye
no one cry
for in you all my spirit shall lie

JENNA
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The disease

Contributed by PhantomVampyress on Saturday, 15th November 2003 @ 01:12:48 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

The disease
it takes over me
it spreads through
my entire body
my legs are numb and raw from
scratching

MY breath be held
from this horrible itcy attacking
perhaps it's itch cream I am lacking

The disease
it takes over me
my eyes are blood shot and bloody raw
So i can no longer see
my hands sore from all the scratching
that they are in pain

the only thing left
is a blind way ward hope
with this eternal itching
I can not cope
My hope is unsure
my itching is too mcuh and i
can't move on

I lay down upon the snow and over me
I let wind blow
the sun rises and I can feel the glow

The disease

It takes over me
even my feet no longer walk
and my mouth can no longer talk
So i lay to die
so this is my only good bye
no one cry
for in you all my spirit shall lie

JENNA

Copyright © PhantomVampyress ... [ 2003-11-15 01:12:48]
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Re: The disease (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 15th November 2003 @ 01:23:47 AM AEST
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very creative 2 get this inspiration from a bite.
peace, joy, luv,
emy

Re: The disease (User Rating: 1 )
by wyrd_faerie on Saturday, 20th March 2004 @ 03:47:18 PM AEST
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wow...this is incredible...wow...

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