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Array ( [sid] => 26963 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => unattainable [time] => 2003-11-12 18:55:07 [hometext] => this a poem i wrote about a someone whom i lost contact with for quite some time but just recently got back in touch with [bodytext] => unattainable-
the warmth of his hand grazing over mine
the sweetness of his kiss whispering to my smile
unattainable-
his eyes staring into my soul
his voice making me whole
-
the smoke circles around your head and it strikes me how unattainable you are
how could i ever be a ####### in those eyes?
why would you ever catch me if i were to fall? im miniscule compared to those hands
you're simply unattainable
--
sadness encompasses me as i sit in your room knowing ill never wake up in that bed
---
it never fails-i smile each time i think about you
your eyes, your smile
your hair, everything wonderful about you
which is everything
of course im just a faded picture, a piece of memory that only takes up space in your mind
you don't even think of me, im sure
----
you never followed me when i ran from your room
i sat in my car waitng for your plea for forgiveness
I though maybe you didn't mean to empty my soul
i finally just drove away and left my heart in your hands, along with the dagger you piercede it with
I always knew you were unattainable [comments] => 2 [counter] => 230 [topic] => 22 [informant] => zeppchic420 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
unattainable

Contributed by zeppchic420 on Wednesday, 12th November 2003 @ 06:55:07 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



unattainable-
the warmth of his hand grazing over mine
the sweetness of his kiss whispering to my smile
unattainable-
his eyes staring into my soul
his voice making me whole
-
the smoke circles around your head and it strikes me how unattainable you are
how could i ever be a ####### in those eyes?
why would you ever catch me if i were to fall? im miniscule compared to those hands
you're simply unattainable
--
sadness encompasses me as i sit in your room knowing ill never wake up in that bed
---
it never fails-i smile each time i think about you
your eyes, your smile
your hair, everything wonderful about you
which is everything
of course im just a faded picture, a piece of memory that only takes up space in your mind
you don't even think of me, im sure
----
you never followed me when i ran from your room
i sat in my car waitng for your plea for forgiveness
I though maybe you didn't mean to empty my soul
i finally just drove away and left my heart in your hands, along with the dagger you piercede it with
I always knew you were unattainable




Copyright © zeppchic420 ... [ 2003-11-12 18:55:07]
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Re: unattainable (User Rating: 1 )
by MnMnMsrcool on Wednesday, 12th November 2003 @ 07:04:05 PM AEST
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wow this is really good...sad and deep but very good i liked it ALOT good job and keep writing


Re: unattainable (User Rating: 1 )
by doug on Wednesday, 12th November 2003 @ 07:06:04 PM AEST
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very good




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