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Array ( [sid] => 26913 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => on the other side [time] => 2003-11-12 01:29:03 [hometext] => a woman in the same building that I worked in inspired me to write this [bodytext] => A day I passed by and didn’t know your name
Was the time I wanted to approach you
But didn’t want you to think I was running game
I was shivering not knowing what to do
You sat there so confident and poise
I was wondering if you could hear me behind you making noise
I didn’t want to come off as just another brother
Like the ones that think about nothing but under the covers
Golden brown like a thanksgiving turkey
So professional sitting there with so much class
I could stare for days so throw away that old hourglass
Something about the way you were checking me out
I could tell from your face and the way you covered your mouth
I noticed you had a naked left hand
First thought was you probably already have a man
I didn’t know and really didn’t care
I was like a dear in front of headlights
On cloud nine continuing to stare
At a woman that caught my attention
A woman shaped with the right dimensions
Seeing you was like a million dollar prize
That’s why I must take a deep breath before I go back to the other side
[comments] => 1 [counter] => 184 [topic] => 33 [informant] => texasw97 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SecretLove )
on the other side

Contributed by texasw97 on Wednesday, 12th November 2003 @ 01:29:03 AM in AEST
Topic: SecretLove



A day I passed by and didn’t know your name
Was the time I wanted to approach you
But didn’t want you to think I was running game
I was shivering not knowing what to do
You sat there so confident and poise
I was wondering if you could hear me behind you making noise
I didn’t want to come off as just another brother
Like the ones that think about nothing but under the covers
Golden brown like a thanksgiving turkey
So professional sitting there with so much class
I could stare for days so throw away that old hourglass
Something about the way you were checking me out
I could tell from your face and the way you covered your mouth
I noticed you had a naked left hand
First thought was you probably already have a man
I didn’t know and really didn’t care
I was like a dear in front of headlights
On cloud nine continuing to stare
At a woman that caught my attention
A woman shaped with the right dimensions
Seeing you was like a million dollar prize
That’s why I must take a deep breath before I go back to the other side




Copyright © texasw97 ... [ 2003-11-12 01:29:03]
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Re: on the other side (User Rating: 1 )
by EmSal on Sunday, 16th November 2003 @ 01:36:14 AM AEST
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Very interesting...you'll have to let us know what happens...if anything.

Emma.




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