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Array ( [sid] => 26742 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Comprehendable [time] => 2003-11-08 19:41:12 [hometext] => Some times you just feel like no one will listen, and you have to express yourself some way. Some ways are poetry...will someone please listen, for my cry [bodytext] => The world reels our of proportions,
People have many distotions.
No one understand the need,
No one hears you plead.
Alone,
Forsaken.
In a corner, in a ball,
Down a long empty hall.
Yelling out your cry of dispair,
People don't hear your prayer.
To pierce things with an icey glare,
Why isn't anything fare.
Will anyone ever see,
Life is littered with debris.
One day,
The world will be gray,
And all will go away. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 251 [topic] => 21 [informant] => BrghtNSnshny [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 7 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

Comprehendable

Contributed by BrghtNSnshny on Saturday, 8th November 2003 @ 07:41:12 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

The world reels our of proportions,
People have many distotions.
No one understand the need,
No one hears you plead.
Alone,
Forsaken.
In a corner, in a ball,
Down a long empty hall.
Yelling out your cry of dispair,
People don't hear your prayer.
To pierce things with an icey glare,
Why isn't anything fare.
Will anyone ever see,
Life is littered with debris.
One day,
The world will be gray,
And all will go away.

Copyright © BrghtNSnshny ... [ 2003-11-08 19:41:12]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Comprehendable (User Rating: 1 )
by JonDgreat on Saturday, 8th November 2003 @ 08:37:03 PM AEST
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Good job girl. You got alot of tallent in writing, you should keep expressing everything you got. And yeah like i say when ppl read my poems "yeah they sound good i guess, but it sure felt like living those words. sometimes i wish i could never have through that hard time", but throught hard times, it shows the person we really are, mostly through poetry.
so yeah keep on writing.

Re: Comprehendable (User Rating: 1 )
by sugar0986 on Saturday, 8th November 2003 @ 09:43:03 PM AEST
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Hey, this was a really good poem you are good at writing keep it up and keep at it.

~Brittany~

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