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Basking in the moons rays, glowing like the crystal waters of the sea
Fingers entwining her shimmering silveriness, age timing its degree
Mind drifting off like the ocean tides, washing out to a distant melody
Among a time so long ago, when they awaited their final good-bye.

Picturing the clear complexion of his face, the rose of his satin lips
The softness of his skin, as they melted together under the wetness of her fingertips
Her dreams softly afloat on the moons sterling eclipse
Wavering in a time so long ago, when they awaited their final good-bye.

Remembering the warmth of his tears, the sound of his muffled weeps
The rippling of his reflection, as she slowly sank back to the deep
The snuffling of the candle, as the light forever vanished to sleep
Reminiscing on a time long ago, when they awaited their final good-bye.

Recalling the loneliness of the coral, the silence of the waves
The redemption of letting go and the shallows of her hearts grave
A love to last for all eternity, pushed away by Gods curses and craves
Recollecting a time long ago, when they departed to their final good-bye.

Surrendering to the airs chill, as the tide delicately touches the shore
Regaining her composure and the heart of her souls unforgiving core
Gliding back into her home, another unhappy ending with a padlocked door
Forever holding a time long ago, when they painfully departed to their final good-bye.
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The Final Goodbye (Years Later)

Contributed by Dragons_Of_Rose on Saturday, 13th July 2002 @ 07:03:04 AM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered





Basking in the moons rays, glowing like the crystal waters of the sea
Fingers entwining her shimmering silveriness, age timing its degree
Mind drifting off like the ocean tides, washing out to a distant melody
Among a time so long ago, when they awaited their final good-bye.

Picturing the clear complexion of his face, the rose of his satin lips
The softness of his skin, as they melted together under the wetness of her fingertips
Her dreams softly afloat on the moons sterling eclipse
Wavering in a time so long ago, when they awaited their final good-bye.

Remembering the warmth of his tears, the sound of his muffled weeps
The rippling of his reflection, as she slowly sank back to the deep
The snuffling of the candle, as the light forever vanished to sleep
Reminiscing on a time long ago, when they awaited their final good-bye.

Recalling the loneliness of the coral, the silence of the waves
The redemption of letting go and the shallows of her hearts grave
A love to last for all eternity, pushed away by Gods curses and craves
Recollecting a time long ago, when they departed to their final good-bye.

Surrendering to the airs chill, as the tide delicately touches the shore
Regaining her composure and the heart of her souls unforgiving core
Gliding back into her home, another unhappy ending with a padlocked door
Forever holding a time long ago, when they painfully departed to their final good-bye.




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Re: The Final Goodbye (Years Later) (User Rating: 1 )
by J_Ganey on Saturday, 13th July 2002 @ 07:07:01 AM AEST
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=) congrats on most read poem, you deserve as much work as you put into them


Re: The Final Goodbye (Years Later) (User Rating: 1 )
by J_Ganey on Saturday, 13th July 2002 @ 07:07:36 AM AEST
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ooops I meant to give you 5


Re: The Final Goodbye (Years Later) (User Rating: 1 )
by Kassidi on Monday, 15th July 2002 @ 09:39:33 AM AEST
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This was a wonderful poem, full of feeling. Lovely.
Kassidi


Re: The Final Goodbye (Years Later) (User Rating: 1 )
by rbps861 on Saturday, 2nd November 2002 @ 12:46:45 PM AEST
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very good write !


Re: The Final Goodbye (Years Later) (User Rating: 1 )
by faffeee on Monday, 24th March 2003 @ 08:46:07 AM AEST
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that sounds like its written from experience!! it definately touched something inside me. fab!


Re: The Final Goodbye (Years Later) (User Rating: 1 )
by Kirby on Tuesday, 1st April 2003 @ 11:22:11 AM AEST
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Very good poem. You have such a talent and keep writing like this!


Re: The Final Goodbye (Years Later) (User Rating: 1 )
by positivelypurple on Sunday, 18th January 2004 @ 06:24:19 PM AEST
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Incredible!


Re: The Final Goodbye (Years Later) (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 07:40:31 PM AEST
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This definately deserves to be Most Read Poem. It is an absolutely beautiful, touching poem, and it reached right into my heart. It is definately one of the most beautiful poems I have read. I absoultely love it.


Re: The Final Goodbye (Years Later) (User Rating: 1 )
by Justalady on Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 07:17:22 PM AEST
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So glad I found this..... I read it several times and it touched a cord in my heart. Great writing. June




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