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Array ( [sid] => 25571 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Fly At The Bar [time] => 2003-10-22 19:07:21 [hometext] => [bodytext] => See me
Walkin' by
Holla
Hoot
Buy me another drink
Or shot

Look me
In the eyes
Do you love me
Better not
No strings attached
Lets have some fun
Bent over
Get your freak on
On the dance floor

If you're lucky
Might get a show
On the bar
Tonight
But I
Need another shot
Another drink
Hey hey
Hoe
There goes the top

Its gettin' rowdy
Gettin' 'lil wild
Everybodies
Got the cameras
Ready
For the twinks
Goin' wild

Tonights
The night
**** the rules
We've had to much
Boozin'
To care
Mr. Police
I do as
I please

Take it
To the bathroom
You know
One turns to three
To or-
Ghee
What the hell
And an audience
Kick up the volume
Tape is runnin'
Just a bar fly
Freak it
This is just homemade
Ridin'
Can I be a star
Search your soul train
On the dance floor
In the groove
And
And

Last call
Time to go
Tomorrow
Won't remember
The face
Or the name
Just the drink
Then the party
Then
Then
Somethin' after
Pass'd out
Is how the night ends
And
Tomorrow
Will be just like today
Another party
On
And on
Till the death [comments] => 2 [counter] => 149 [topic] => 54 [informant] => ml03 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => happypoetry )
Fly At The Bar

Contributed by ml03 on Wednesday, 22nd October 2003 @ 07:07:21 PM in AEST
Topic: happypoetry



See me
Walkin' by
Holla
Hoot
Buy me another drink
Or shot

Look me
In the eyes
Do you love me
Better not
No strings attached
Lets have some fun
Bent over
Get your freak on
On the dance floor

If you're lucky
Might get a show
On the bar
Tonight
But I
Need another shot
Another drink
Hey hey
Hoe
There goes the top

Its gettin' rowdy
Gettin' 'lil wild
Everybodies
Got the cameras
Ready
For the twinks
Goin' wild

Tonights
The night
**** the rules
We've had to much
Boozin'
To care
Mr. Police
I do as
I please

Take it
To the bathroom
You know
One turns to three
To or-
Ghee
What the hell
And an audience
Kick up the volume
Tape is runnin'
Just a bar fly
Freak it
This is just homemade
Ridin'
Can I be a star
Search your soul train
On the dance floor
In the groove
And
And

Last call
Time to go
Tomorrow
Won't remember
The face
Or the name
Just the drink
Then the party
Then
Then
Somethin' after
Pass'd out
Is how the night ends
And
Tomorrow
Will be just like today
Another party
On
And on
Till the death




Copyright © ml03 ... [ 2003-10-22 19:07:21]
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Re: Fly At The Bar (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 22nd October 2003 @ 08:01:26 PM AEST
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Very creative!
peace, joy, luv,
emy


Re: Fly At The Bar (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Wednesday, 22nd October 2003 @ 11:31:39 PM AEST
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Vivid write.... nicely done.
Jenni




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