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Daddy wont you come for me,and carry me back home
It's raining and it's cold tonight,my tears are all thats warm
And daddy you know how scared I am,of the thunderstorms
I think I hear you calling me,I cant find you,though I've tried
I thought you would have come for me,you always did when I cried
I wish I was at home in bed,with my teddy snuggled near
To feel your kiss goodnight,and see your smile clear
Your lil man is tired daddy,and wants to go nigh nigh's
So I better say my prayers,the ones we shared,you and I
Daddy in the window,leave a candle burning bright
So your lil man can see his way,back to your loving arms tonight
And GOD,if you are listening,please hold my tiny hand
Just until I get back home,just until my daddy can [comments] => 9 [counter] => 244 [topic] => 32 [informant] => LovingWhispers [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

Daddy,Daddy

Contributed by LovingWhispers on Tuesday, 21st October 2003 @ 12:59:24 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

Daddy Im so lost out here,frightened all alone
Daddy wont you come for me,and carry me back home
It's raining and it's cold tonight,my tears are all thats warm
And daddy you know how scared I am,of the thunderstorms
I think I hear you calling me,I cant find you,though I've tried
I thought you would have come for me,you always did when I cried
I wish I was at home in bed,with my teddy snuggled near
To feel your kiss goodnight,and see your smile clear
Your lil man is tired daddy,and wants to go nigh nigh's
So I better say my prayers,the ones we shared,you and I
Daddy in the window,leave a candle burning bright
So your lil man can see his way,back to your loving arms tonight
And GOD,if you are listening,please hold my tiny hand
Just until I get back home,just until my daddy can

Copyright © LovingWhispers ... [ 2003-10-21 12:59:24]
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Re: Daddy,Daddy (User Rating: 1 )
by PoloRM on Tuesday, 21st October 2003 @ 01:43:25 PM AEST
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little Daniel Thomas will have a prayer in my heart, thanks to you.

Re: Daddy,Daddy (User Rating: 1 )
by PoloRM on Tuesday, 21st October 2003 @ 01:46:23 PM AEST
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little Daniel Thomas will have a prayer in my heart, thanks to you.

Re: Daddy,Daddy (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Tuesday, 21st October 2003 @ 02:37:30 PM AEST
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ooooh that poor little one! of couse he has my prayers, let us know when they find him, hugs n' love nessa

Re: Daddy,Daddy (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Tuesday, 21st October 2003 @ 03:29:41 PM AEST
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so touching I hope they find him safe and sound soon. keep on writing.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: Daddy,Daddy (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Tuesday, 21st October 2003 @ 03:56:54 PM AEST
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Oh NO, what a tragedy! Please Dear God hear our prayers for he is so wee. Keep him safe and sound, until someone finds him around, we pray.
I'm so sorry, hurts my heart
Beautiful write
ConSue

Re: Daddy,Daddy (User Rating: 1 )
by Jellybellyprincess on Tuesday, 21st October 2003 @ 04:11:32 PM AEST
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I'll keep him in my prayers, sincerely, truly. God will always look out for EVERYONE, so I pray that His hand of comfort strengthens for Daniel, and that His peace and love console those who love Daniel dearly.

God bless,
Jellybellyprincess

Re: Daddy,Daddy (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Tuesday, 21st October 2003 @ 06:35:04 PM AEST
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I will add him to my prayer list
Shari

Re: Daddy,Daddy (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 21st October 2003 @ 06:52:18 PM AEST
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in this world nothing can effect me as a write like this. my heart prays, my hands restless. Crow

Re: Daddy,Daddy (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Tuesday, 21st October 2003 @ 07:02:15 PM AEST
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Yes, I have been praying for him too since I heard .. the poor little mite ... and this poem expresses so well what he is going through ... you always have a way Sharon of going right to the heart ... Jan

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