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Array ( [sid] => 25202 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Dark Hallway [time] => 2003-10-17 01:16:13 [hometext] => ........favors for the silence........ [bodytext] => wakened from her slumber
betrayal in the night
ruptured sense of
right from wrong
blinded without
any light

favors for the silence
tresspassers beware
protection comes with
all the strings
retribution with
just a stare

adoration for a price
violation always free
mesmerized her very soul
darkened evil
is all she sees

the heart to race on
the heat to follow
her tears ignored
her pleas so hollow

he took with
little care
and forsaken malice
she lost her footing
tripping off balance

his task so great
he blinded her will
broken and battered
left open for others' evil

lost and crying out
shelter in the storm
solace in a shoulder
struggle no more [comments] => 8 [counter] => 170 [topic] => 13 [informant] => jaeann [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
Dark Hallway

Contributed by jaeann on Friday, 17th October 2003 @ 01:16:13 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



wakened from her slumber
betrayal in the night
ruptured sense of
right from wrong
blinded without
any light

favors for the silence
tresspassers beware
protection comes with
all the strings
retribution with
just a stare

adoration for a price
violation always free
mesmerized her very soul
darkened evil
is all she sees

the heart to race on
the heat to follow
her tears ignored
her pleas so hollow

he took with
little care
and forsaken malice
she lost her footing
tripping off balance

his task so great
he blinded her will
broken and battered
left open for others' evil

lost and crying out
shelter in the storm
solace in a shoulder
struggle no more




Copyright © jaeann ... [ 2003-10-17 01:16:13]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Dark Hallway (User Rating: 1 )
by EmSal on Friday, 17th October 2003 @ 02:04:37 AM AEST
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Oh my! This is so powerfully written...so painful, yet an awesome write. Take care now.

Emma.


Re: Dark Hallway (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Friday, 17th October 2003 @ 02:38:01 AM AEST
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at last silence rules..powerful write. venkat


Re: Dark Hallway (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Friday, 17th October 2003 @ 03:07:02 AM AEST
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So heartbreaking ... I hope you have found some peace now ... Jan


Re: Dark Hallway (User Rating: 1 )
by Coquillion on Friday, 17th October 2003 @ 04:09:21 AM AEST
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This poem is awesome - I wish you peace!


Re: Dark Hallway (User Rating: 1 )
by TearS on Friday, 17th October 2003 @ 07:11:02 AM AEST
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!It's really romantic but through a different way!!!


Re: Dark Hallway (User Rating: 1 )
by LovingWhispers on Friday, 17th October 2003 @ 07:49:53 AM AEST
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I know the peace you now have found
Yet still the darkness calls around
Your spirit strong,your will to breathe
Touches and inspires me..

As always you reach deep inside and create your masterpieces of emotional writes
Excellent!!


Re: Dark Hallway (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Friday, 17th October 2003 @ 08:14:08 AM AEST
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The echos of evil still through the halls of your mind...I do so wish you peace
Shari


Re: Dark Hallway (User Rating: 1 )
by norm on Monday, 20th October 2003 @ 10:01:21 AM AEST
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I don't know how it ended,
It might be A or B,
I wish you luck however,
It's not for me to see.




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