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My feelings dance unprotected
As in words they pirouette
Across a stage before the eyes
Of people never met
They entertain the daily few
Who come with friendly eyes
Who when the dance is over,
Leave with no goodbyes
Into the hearts of many
I hope to dance my way
To let them see that here I'll dance
Each and every day
An audience of loving hearts and
Beautiful minds I see
As every dance,each pirouette
Brings them ever closer to me
Sometimes I stumble in my moves
Or lose the rhythmic beat
But there stands one, with hat in hand
Laying roses at my feet
A man who comes here often
To see my every dance
The one who stands in shadows
And carries roses in his hands
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Roses At Her Feet

Contributed by LovingWhispers on Thursday, 16th October 2003 @ 08:43:07 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

My feelings dance unprotected
As in words they pirouette
Across a stage before the eyes
Of people never met
They entertain the daily few
Who come with friendly eyes
Who when the dance is over,
Leave with no goodbyes
Into the hearts of many
I hope to dance my way
To let them see that here I'll dance
Each and every day
An audience of loving hearts and
Beautiful minds I see
As every dance,each pirouette
Brings them ever closer to me
Sometimes I stumble in my moves
Or lose the rhythmic beat
But there stands one, with hat in hand
Laying roses at my feet
A man who comes here often
To see my every dance
The one who stands in shadows
And carries roses in his hands

Copyright © LovingWhispers ... [ 2003-10-16 20:43:07]
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Re: Roses At Her Feet (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Thursday, 16th October 2003 @ 08:56:58 PM AEST
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fantastic...and the dances are always so lovely
Shari

Re: Roses At Her Feet (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Thursday, 16th October 2003 @ 10:31:03 PM AEST
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It's such a lovely metaphor to use - your feelings and the dance ... and how he will always be waiting in the wings with roses ... such beautiful words ... Jan

Re: Roses At Her Feet (User Rating: 1 )
by LovingWhispers on Thursday, 16th October 2003 @ 10:31:47 PM AEST
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This is a repost..an older one I wrote for Rakerman(larry).Its one of my faves because he made me feel so very special :)

Re: Roses At Her Feet (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Friday, 17th October 2003 @ 02:55:00 AM AEST
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Excellent..a beautiful work of art..a lovely performance of your soul for man who adores you with roses of love.
whispers, thanks for sharing this. I may never forget this lovely poem....venkat

Re: Roses At Her Feet (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Friday, 17th October 2003 @ 07:02:03 AM AEST
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I remember so clearly....you said to watch for a poem about a ballerina and when I saw it I was soooo :o)....Thank you for this beautiful write...and for the dreams.

Roses at your feet

Re: Roses At Her Feet (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 17th October 2003 @ 07:26:06 AM AEST
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All I can say is that you deserve to be made feel special. You are one of the best people I have met and so very talented. Such a beautiful poem.
-hugz-stacey

Re: Roses At Her Feet (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Friday, 17th October 2003 @ 12:48:35 PM AEST
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dearest sharon this is beautiful, sooo beautiful, i always thought that was soo sweet with the whole roses thing, big hugs n' lotsa love, nessa x

Re: Roses At Her Feet (User Rating: 1 )
by Saira on Saturday, 18th October 2003 @ 09:22:42 AM AEST
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This is an exceptionally beautiful write. LovingWhispers, you have an impressive style...I really love the way you write and choose beautiful words.

Saira

Re: Roses At Her Feet (User Rating: 1 )
by Merry on Saturday, 18th October 2003 @ 10:32:49 AM AEST
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oh how exquisite this one is - how perfectly in tune with the message - bravo

merry

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