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Array ( [sid] => 25099 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => ?????????? READ [time] => 2003-10-15 17:13:59 [hometext] => NOT ABOUT MEJUST WHAT A MATE DONE 2 SOME GIRL...BUT SHE ALWAYS CARED [bodytext] => Everytime they saw you they laughed in your face not feeling scared or any shame.
They said you smelt and were to blame for everything that happen even though you was sane.
people laughed and people cried you was the centre of there eyes.
one minute you were 'big nose' the next you was sly is that what you got for being quite & shy?

They called you 'dirty' they called you ' sad' it was'nt your fault it was just your ' bad'.
Everytime they called you fat i wanted to say
'shut up you stupid rats'
I never had the courage I never had the guts I was as sad as them every time they cussed.

You watched us laugh you watched us play hoping we would ask you to join 'our way'
As I walked up to you asking you to come over I saw the spark in your eyes, you thought I started to care but im sorry it was just a stupid dare!
and when you walked away in tears I realized I was nothing but lame

Im sorry that I caused you so much pain,
I was being selfish and completly insane..
If i ever see you again I promise to say sorry ..I promise to hug you & love you

XxXxXxX

[comments] => 8 [counter] => 359 [topic] => 12 [informant] => M2003UK [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => CongratulatoryPoems )

?????????? READ

Contributed by M2003UK on Wednesday, 15th October 2003 @ 05:13:59 PM in AEST
Topic: CongratulatoryPoems

Everytime they saw you they laughed in your face not feeling scared or any shame.
They said you smelt and were to blame for everything that happen even though you was sane.
people laughed and people cried you was the centre of there eyes.
one minute you were 'big nose' the next you was sly is that what you got for being quite & shy?

They called you 'dirty' they called you ' sad' it was'nt your fault it was just your ' bad'.
Everytime they called you fat i wanted to say
'shut up you stupid rats'
I never had the courage I never had the guts I was as sad as them every time they cussed.

You watched us laugh you watched us play hoping we would ask you to join 'our way'
As I walked up to you asking you to come over I saw the spark in your eyes, you thought I started to care but im sorry it was just a stupid dare!
and when you walked away in tears I realized I was nothing but lame

Im sorry that I caused you so much pain,
I was being selfish and completly insane..
If i ever see you again I promise to say sorry ..I promise to hug you & love you

XxXxXxX

Copyright © M2003UK ... [ 2003-10-15 17:13:59]
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Re: ?????????? READ (User Rating: 1 )
by Desi on Wednesday, 15th October 2003 @ 06:30:07 PM AEST
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I like it. It so truthful and full of meaning. I know a girl like that but, I try to be nice, even though I'm not always.
check out of my poems if you wish.
~Desi

Re: ?????????? READ (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Wednesday, 15th October 2003 @ 07:46:36 PM AEST
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thnx for your honesty with this. I used to be a bully in my younger years and its not the way to go.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: ?????????? READ (User Rating: 1 )
by EmSal on Friday, 17th October 2003 @ 03:33:08 AM AEST
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Awww that is not nice...but a nice poem for her. Maybe you should give it to her.

Emma.

Re: ?????????? READ (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 25th October 2003 @ 06:33:45 AM AEST
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You....a bully Joel....never! nah just kidding. It was very sweet of you to write this poem and very cruel of your friend to do what he done. A very honest and caring write. Well done.

Re: ?????????? READ (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 26th October 2003 @ 03:27:57 PM AEST
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one of the worse things in life is being a bully or getting bullied but the best thing is 2 realize what you done is wrong..this is well expressed..i hope ur friend aint a bully any more if she still is then may b you should give this poem 2 her...

Re: ?????????? READ (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 27th October 2003 @ 09:30:53 AM AEST
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ur lovly u could never b a bully but i kno who r on about! lolz

nice 4 u 2 write a poem 4 her

luv kt xxx

Re: ?????????? READ (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 6th November 2003 @ 01:20:33 PM AEST
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oooooooooo awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

Re: ?????????? READ (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 16th November 2003 @ 09:00:50 AM AEST
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y does ur poems always make me cry! :( i luv it but write a happy one nxt time

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